All Comments on 'Variations on a Heat Wave'

Cute and sexy story 🔥🔥

I also liked the way this story was created with the jumps between the POVs, the transitions were smooth.

I on the other hand did not like the jumps in POVs. There is no reason this story couldn't have just been told with a third person narrator.

"The transitions were smooth" No, they weren't, because they were transitions. None were needed.

Very well written and I liked the transitions. They were well written and different from most stories.