All Comments on 'Varna Ch. 03'

Ive been reading your stories for years now and this to be the best installment Ive read from you. Keep up the good work. I cant wait for the next installment.

I see we have some seriously star-crossed lovers here. I'm so invested in this story, it's really good.

This is a great story you are writing. Thanks

No words can properly describe the absolute love I harbor for your writings. I'm not trying to be a creeper lol, but your writing style resonates in me like few other authors have. Please please keep it up

Glasha shines every time she speaks, and only endears the reader to her more (as well as Tauma); really Tauma doesn't stay far behind, and he's very well-grounded.

I love how you literally gloss over the mother in the story, not giving her dialogue nor space to vent her bile--it's very appropriate treatment. How you told Urbo's story about his father and family was no less stunning, and it conjured up some of the same feelings the characters reflected. I loved how you used the time apart to get Tauma and Glasha to learn patience, with Tauma more so through his experiences, and then displaying his maturity through how he avoided pitfalls in questioning Glasha's father, Rhigen.

Quite the grand tour, and you carried us along, just as Tauma wrote so many detailed pages to Glasha on his voyage. You take the reader on quite a journey and I must agree that this tale is your most endearing and best-described story yet: it is a 5, hands down.

I’m captivated by this story. It is so well written, with well developed and distinct characters that, while not covered in this story, are obviously living their own lives while we follow Tauma’s life. A very engaging story that just dew me in. I look forward to the next chapter.