All Comments on 'Varna Ch. 11'

Another excellent chapter. Thank you

Brilliant and touching, just as I have come to expect from one of my all-time favourite authors on this site and overall!

Likely setting up for a foreign invasion, after the succession is fought against Merik.

Merik.

& Tauma is due a heart break.

Great writing and narrative as usual.

Phenomenal story. You never cease to impress me.

That was well written. There was a lot of moving pieces and the writing was very clear about what was happening. Well done. Thanks

I hope Durgat will be okay in the end

And the narrative is gripping enough to excuse the lack of erotic content.....

Which is saying something on this site...grin.

Fantastic

"Some people just don't understand it: the pain of childhood and adolescence doesn't always go away with the passage of time. Years later, the hurt is still there, and sometimes the scars never fully heal."

Well said. So true. You are the best on this site.

Holy cow, I was shocked that three brothers all died in the same battle, (or chapter). Great writing, I don’t know how you do it, story after story The detail, and thought you put into your writing is amazing. I think you may be the most imaginative author on this site. Thanks. KS

Another cracking chapter, well thought out with sufficient detail but not too much. Now where does he go? Oh the agony of the wait!!

I am continually amazed by how you knit these threads together. This chapter’s conflict was thrilling, its loss weighty, and its victory wonderfully bittersweet. Thank you for writing this story, and I can’t wait to read more