All Comments on 'Varna Ch. 14'

I'm not even going to try to assimilate all you shared in this chapter, except that it's a huge surprise they also have a time-walker and that Gedere is alive. If we weren't on pins and needles before, we are certainly there now. I would love to see Tauma find a way to strike back and kill that traitor (I'm sure others feel the same)--in addition to discovering whom the time-walker is and killing him/her; that must be a priority. 5

Thanks. I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is really well written

Of course!

Remind me again, who was Gedere?

You have a real talent for bringing battles and tactics to life as you've proven many times. This time you have the creeping dread of an overwhelmingly superior large force with many unknowns to help bring it all to life. Fabulous. Can't wait for the next one.

Gedere was Nathal’s poet sidekick.

Damn I had completely forgotten about Gedere! Your story never fails to excite and impress!