All Comments on 'Varna Ch. 16'

Needs a 10-stars award option. Exceptional. 😀😀😀

Outstanding!

This sounded like the last chapter. Is it?

Loved the whole thing. Very well done!

As you know, I'm a huge fan of your various works. This story arc has enjoyed a really enjoyable mix of the best parts of them all. Characters, intrigue, strategy, politics and everything between. And of course the story. I'm intrigued as to how you plan these novellas.

Yes...VERY good.

Magnificent! I agree with Comentarist82 below, it sounds like the end but I'm sure you'll something as good up your sleeve to keep us all happy in the future. Thank you for all the pleasure you give us.

Comentarista82, one more at least, I think. He won’t leave the Gedere and Yavantay thread unresolved, I think.

Great story, thank you!

Fantastic, thank you so much for giving us readers this story. KS

There are very few top-tier writers on Literotica. You are not only one of the top of the top tier of writers, your world-building and expository skills are second to none. Loved this tale.

There's very little erotica here, and I DON'T CARE! The only reason I scored this 5/5 is because I couldn't score it 10/10.

There are still few loose ends left. I hope you resolve them soon. Yavantay is still out there. Sanatha is still unmarried. But, this has been an amazing series so far. 5 stars.