All Comments on 'Vegas, Baby!'

Got through the first 5 lines and gave up. Can understand trying to get the reader to follow the language but maybe rewrite it for all to understand.

Where is the tag at the end of the story??? Seems incomplete.

Jesus fuck use normal English

Sorry, too hard to follow your language...I'd say rewrite in regular english and not try to convey an accent in writing. Way too hard to read. Couldn't even finish it

This is horrible

Enjoyed it immensely - once I'd realised what a successful job Mt JohnTom10 had made of the Dublin accent! James Joyce must be rolling in his grave! More would always be welcome …

Might be better if it was written in an actual language. Even Google couldn’t translate this crap.

The accent of a complete fucking retard? What the fuck was that? Thankfully, very short, and clearly not worth the effort to try to decode the Ebonics, or whatever that was supposed to be.

The stylized language distracted too much.

Jesus I’m from Dublin and that was mind numbing to read

What.the.fuck is with the 'language'? If this is your attempt at...Irish? or any other actual language, you need to cut your damned fingers off.

Wow. I got thrush’s translation of aces lines and my brain hurt. Interesting idea, lost in a language that couldn’t be understood. A person shouldn’t have to “work” to enjoy a story.

I know this was supposed to be Irish, but it read very much as the Afrikaans accents.

Complete words! Use them! Why bother posting crap like this?

Like I American and I was able to understand and even read with an Irish accent, so idk what everyone else is going on about. I really liked it!