All Comments on 'Velvet'

Quickly, you have become one of my favorite writers.

The only complaint being this story felt short and incomplete, so I assume there will be further chapters. At least I hope.

Perhaps add some conflict to Lara's quest -- the easy part is done: Getting laid. Now she needs to convince him to love her. That ought to have some larger hurdles.

Again, extremely enjoyable with some of the best character voices I've read on here. Keep it up.

Its like a perverted version of pinanchio LOL

This reminds me of a story I once read called "I, Real Doll". It was written quite a few years ago, but it still has the same feel to it. A Real Doll tells of how she adores her owner and longs to be a real woman, but laments the fact that she is forever locked in the body of rubber and steel. Looks like this one made it, though. Interesting.

a gorgeous story beautifully written :-)

Write more please!

Nice to read something that leaves you feeling hopeful in the end

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A Beautiful Story, Beautifully Written!

11/10!!!!!