All Comments on 'Venezuelan Paradise'

by Aruri

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
You need an editor

This would have been an excellent story, instead of just good. You make a woman's throat "Sore" not "Soar." Yes, I know, I'm being Mr. Grammar Nazi, so sue me. I'm sorry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Chocolate Variation

Some marathon. . .w h e w! ! !

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great story telling

This passionate love story has a great setting, interesting characters, a fine plot, and an excellent love scene. The story is told so well that the small errors in spelling and grammar are hardly noticeable. It is followed by Paradise Hook-up. Five stars

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Humbly, I'm just different from everyone, in that, all I think about is sex. And I mean that is the most serious way possible. My mind never stops racing, allowing me to excel when sex is involved.