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by bunnydoll15

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

A great start to a fantastic story

Please continue with this story

ahforaliyaahforaliyaover 10 years ago
nicee

love the story so far!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
KEEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVEEEEE IT!!! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!

shyintxshyintxover 10 years ago

I don't usually agree with anoy posts but this time I do. This is exactly the same with the same damn cliffhanger. I was hoping for more.

fishingrod48fishingrod48over 10 years ago
Good Start

Keep writing you have something here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
writing style good

The writing style is good. The story ending sucked. No indications if this is a multiple chapter story or what.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Is there a chance of actually reading a chapter 2? PLEASE. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Please keep writing, at least until Mark fully ravish Veronica.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

crap realy dont like this master shit reckon you can keep it

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

no end no good she realy wouldnt be atracted to him so try again

davidmartin4davidmartin4about 1 month ago

Terrific start to a very entertaining story. Why have you stopped writing?

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