All Comments on 'Veronica and Anna Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
SLOW BUILD UP...........

loving it - just one thing PLEASE SUBMIT MORE THAN ONE PAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good start

I can't wait for another chapter

rml65rml65over 8 years ago
Is a very great start!

Loved the story can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Nice start.

Keep em coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Now, turn that dream fantasy into loving reality :)

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 8 years ago

Oooh, this is going to be good! It's your to win or lose

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
jennyeatspussy

Great start, two young girls exploring their sexuality as equals, keep it up, and please keep the `slut' comments out of it.

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