All Comments on 'Veronica's Story Ch. 01'

I'm hoping Dad brings over some friends or even strangers to help train little sexy Ronnie!

Good job!

Not a fan of BDSM but this was not to bad

And I have done BDSM. However I can see this story getting old quick. If you continue with more chapters you might get better results in the BDSM section for the incest aspect has came and went. Now its about something else.

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I like it very much I hope you continue.

I usually don’t read much bdsm but your writing is so beautiful that it was a joy to read.

The differences though my older sister is always in a pair of pantyhose or thigh highs and a pair of heels, right after my brother in law leaves for work.. then pretty much all day Monday,We'd,and Fri.. I'm buried in her, pounding her from 9 am till about 430 pm.. she's 24 and I'm 19.. I've lived with them 3 years and we've been fucking since I was 17.. she calls me Master too.. but obviously we play it cool when Steven is home.. when he goes out of town, man aw man... Just love my whore sister in nylons.. holding her legs up using her heel of her high heels as leverage drives her insane..

im beckydavis313 @yahoo.com not sure about bdsm but would try it wish dad take me lol

Great story.

Jealous of the Dad. Love how much the daughter got into her Dad's 'scent' from His boxers...

Keep up the good work...