All Comments on 'Very Momentous'

by Egmont Grigor

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Orion623Orion623over 15 years ago
Very Enjoyable

A lighthearted romp populated with a cast of idealized characters all of which is leavened with humor throughout the story. A very fine effort by EG.

chefschmittychefschmittyover 15 years ago
once again you have put humor into Sex

Thank you for yet again another great story you always make me laugh and that is alot of times better then any stroke story!!! I have read every story and i have not found one I didnt like!!! I would have to say thou that I realy like some of your longer stories as I convert them to microsoft reader files and take them with me on my PPC you rock keep the great stories cumming

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent

story,you are able to mix relationships and humour together to great effect.You are one of the handfull of authors that I make a point of looking out for.

pope32767pope32767over 15 years ago
Not very American Americans

This was mostly a well-written story, but the dialogue seriously needs an edit by someone who knows spoken American English. Some of the things the characters say are downright jarring.

knightofheartsknightofheartsover 15 years ago
Nice

Very Impressive Dialogue.

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