by Skei0
Great story. But needs another chapter or two. Does mom and son continue and or will the sister join in. Possible get one or both pregnant. Mom is young enough for one or two more kids.
This is usually not my thing, but after reading your Bumpy Ride stories I decided to check out your other work. I am glad that I stumbled on this… DAMN!
I loved it. Part 2 please. That was very well written, and the reader could easily visualize what was happening. That's what the great story tellers do here.
(5/23/2023) I agree with the anonymous commenter from a month ago below. The ending was perfect for a first chapter. But it has been seventeen years since this gem was submitted. I hope the author is still writing. Five stars and it goes on my list.
Beautiful writing. Excellent description. Strange situation. Very exciting. Could visualise the entire scene like a movie. You could come up with a part 2 with more interesting situations between the mother and son as well as the bother and sister. Love it. Undoubtedly, Five Stars.
Wow, I really enjoyed this! It was such an original idea as well and makes one wonder about other possible, unlikely scenarios. I agree with others, a second part would be interesting.
OMG What a fantastic ending. Was not expecting that at all. Terrific story..
The story was fantastic. The twist and turns got me excited. And ready to touch myself
Implausible, but funny as hell. The final comments from the kids made the story for me, sometimes you just have to laugh at the absurd. Good job Thanks.
Implausable and unscientific as you can get, but just a whole lot of fun to read and imagine -- and since this ain't Scientific American, huzza for a heckuva hot and hilarious tale..
The writer doesn't know the first thing about earthquakes. That being said, this story was hot none the less. Now how about Mom and brother helping the sister to find some relief... lol.
The author has obviously never been anywhere near earthquake country.
Say what you will about the story itself, but I always find it hysterical how an "earthquake" has somehow become predictable and able to be anticipated like a tornado, "locked down" with barriers like a hurricane, as well as other various bits of weather.
Funniest is the urgency to empty the bathtub. Before bottled water, one of the first things you did was fill the bathtub with water in case it got shut off. It's actually still done so things like flushing the toilet is possible.
So ignorant I always find it funny as I read it.
I've no idea of the actual elapsed time for this story.. but.. it was EXCELLENT !
Great things can come out of disasters. Like a new special relationship. As everyone surveyed the damage, James's room was all but destroyed, while his parent's and Sophie's were pretty much still intact. It was decided since his parents had a king size bed, he'd sleep in his mom's room that night, and Sophie would sleep in hers. Sophie awakened that night to what sounded like her mom in pain. As she quietly listened she realized it wasn't pain, but pleasure! James and her mother were fucking! As she continued to listen, her mom started to get a little louder, things became a little more audible. Oh James, that feels so good, you seem to know just what to do to me. Your cock is so much bigger than your dad's, I just love it. Oh mom, I never knew it could feel this good. You are so hot, and sexy, fucking you is like a dream come true. Oh James! Oh James! A little harder baby! Oh yes! Oh yes honey! Just like that! Oh mom! I don't know how much longer I can hold out! Don't worry baby, I'm almost there now! Oh yes! Oh yes! Oh honey! Oh James! Oh James! Oh God! Oh Baby! Oh yes! Yes! Yes! Oh honey! Oh honey! I'm coming baby! Oh honey! Oh honey! Oh mom! Here I cum mom! Oh god! Oh god! Oh yes mom! Sophie couldn't believe what she was hearing. She also didn't realized at first that she was playing with her clit. Her brother and mother sounded so hot as they fucked! She started working her clit even harder as she could hear James and her mom still moaning from their orgasms. Sophie was as horny as she'd ever been as she worked her fingers even faster as she felt her orgasm approaching. Suddenly she was thinking of her brother James, and he was fucking her. She imagined his shaft working it's way in, and out of her hungry pussy. His body above hers as he drove into her harder and faster. Her breathing began to get faster and faster, as her fingers were now a blur over her pleasure center. James and his mom had quieted down by now, but were still both breathing harder than normal. They suddenly heard some noise, a rustling coming from Sophie's room. They listened more carefully and they could hear Sophie saying something. Was she having a dream, or a nightmare they wondered? Suddenly they could hear her very clearly. Oh yes! Oh god James! Fuck me! Fuck me hard! Oh yes! Oh yes James! You're so big! Your so hard! Oh fuck! Oh James! Oh yes! Harder James! Oh yes! Oh yes! I'm coming James! Oh god! Oh god, Oh god!
One of the best of the mother-son category stories on Literotica. Of course every story is complete as written; but....
The possibilities are nearly limitless for a Chapter 2 or at least an Epilogue.
What happens between mom & James? How does their relationship change? Does hubby's continued absence foment further dalliance? Are there "aftershocks" lurking beneath their feet?
What happens with mom & Sophie? James & Sophie?
What would be the consequences of the hubby returning? Will Sophie keep her confidence?
My, Oh My!
Please take up the quill again!
Her eyes instantly took in the image of her mother, spine arched and head back as her brothers cock exploded inside of me, coating my hole with his thick cum. My feverish eyes held my daughters gaze apologetically as, unable to prevent my climax, my mouth opened and a gasp of ecstatic pleasure purred in my throat.
Something about her looking her daughter in the eyes when she cums almost pushes me to come.
This story is awesome! I would love to see what happens next (and maybe Sophie joins in?).
I would love to see more of this. It's extremely well-written and the story is hot. I can't help but think a family orgy is next. I mean Sophie seemed to enjoy watching enough that she might want to join in.
Thank you for sharing! It's really is awesome.
I thought that this story was amazing I came immediately after the mum came. I would love to read a sequel and I only wish I could have a similar experience. 11/10
this is a plea to the author to return to writing the events that ensue after the bathroom scene.
I really liked this story. It was written in such a way that I could feel the earth shake their bathroom.
This almost happened to me but there was no earthquake. I was in the bathroom and slipped on the rug and after grabbing whatever I could I fell into the bathtub backwards, on my ass. The bad news was that I was alone and sex was not on my mind,
Most of the other stories have the mother and son wanting each other and after a day or two finally do it. All the while complaining that mothers and sons should not be fucking each other.
Most people would not believe that such a thing could happen but it can.
We see news clips where people go sliding all over the room, not being able to stand and I'm sure fall over each other.
The author was well versed on quake activity and was great in making the son grab anything he could which in this case turned out to be his mother's nightgown so now we can see why their both naked. Thanks
It is. A very good piece of writing but I. Think it shouldn't end there.
I love it! Makes me cum every time. Would love a sequel. The little sister needs to get railed.
I voted you a 3/5 for a funny version of these mother/son accidental-ride stories. It was far hotter than some other car/bus ride ones and, if you'd only made it more expanded by not abandoning it, I'd consider it a pretty good start to a rollicking good romp. I normally hate group/swinging family romance fantasies but, in this kind of absurd/fun fantasy, why not have the sister sample them both and go full blast into the mother's unplanned pregnancy then lactation too later on.
I don't mind how unrealistic the quake was, intergalactic space lasers wouldn't make any sound either but I paid to watch Star Wars anyway, back in the day. Inaccuracy is only insulting to the reader if you were seriously trying to make us believe this really happened. I get insulted when a realistic couple start out normally then flip into being porno actors at the drop of mom's bikini top. This submission was fine, only it should have continued on a couple more pages. Thanks for the read.
Similar but on a boat test drivr..on a rough channel.
Using the portapot during a low gale wind , my friends
Sister was lifted off the johnny seat and suspended mid
air as the boat dropped between waves.the cutty door
Snapped open, sucked both my legs down the three steps
Legs following at neck break velocity. The wave
hit the port bow, tossing our vessel about following
A short midair stop. Physics played a part slammimg
My battered torso to the floor and I layed back down
Toward the head as the poor gal, bare bottom, splashed
Of blue, landed square on my mid and nearly crush the
Manhood to death..the rest was history.
So the story goes..yes its possible
the supposed innocence of the accidental intimacies?
ya sure. do you think mom would accept it as accidental if it had been the brother and sister, and she was the one who turned on the torch?
I didn't think so. or,
if there is any lingering doubt, I have an often sold bridge for sale.
Guess the earthquake wasn't the only thing that made the earth move for her and a new meaning to fertilizing the garden. Was a hilarious story.
Very Hot,and Sexy but also Funny at the same time....hope to see a part II
It would be a crime to leave this story as an accidental one of . The perfect addition to this story is that this doesn't remain in the bathroom , but continues as James ,mother and sister enter into a life long love triangle with children to both . Don't leave the story hanging unfinished , it's far too good not to have a ending .
Does the movie, "Ther Perfect Storm", ring a bell to anyone?
Though the story has two serious subject matters--the earthquake itself, and the very pleasing carnal, incestual sexual consummation of a mother and son!!
The story as it actually is detailed is most likely not possible, however one cannot say with certainty that the totality of the situation is impossible. For James and his mutually satisfied mother the impossible did happen. To me, as an avid lover of romantically fulfilling carnal incestual literature, I am most thrilled it happened, in the mind of our illusturious writer/author.
The story has a titillating and humorous bent to it throughout; and even some suspense that Sophie (and her "torch") would too-soon discover her sibling and her mother in the throes of the most passionate, though totally unexpected, fuck of their lives! Awesome in every aspect.
Though, we as only the readers of this fabulous story will never know the future of these story character's, we as reader's can use our vivid imaginations to put our own selfish ending to the story. My wish is that (unnamed) mother decides to continue their "perfect storm" affair, and that she has now already been impregnated with her's and her son's child!!!
Make more chapters, please!
May Mom get pregnant, and sis join them and also get pregnant! )))
similar to the ending of the terry southern classic "candy" where candy and her dad are thrown together during a storm. check it out, it's very funny and similar to this situation.
The best funny story I have read, I wish I had some accidents like that, hard as rock now.
It would make for a great follow up, that the envious daughter should seek out her brother's services to relieve the itch she now feels.
That has got to be the funniest story I have read in a long time. So the facts may not have been accurate, but as a piece of fiction anything goes, Right? There is a name for that but I'm not sure what it is called; 'Literary License' or something like that.
Definitely keep on writing. I'll look forward to more hysterical laughter.
As the saying goes, "Thanks, I needed that!". ;-)
Wow!... seething with lust and "forbidden" debauchery... 5-star!!
While (as stated) .."So many incalculably small odds" as to render this a fantasy excursion of epic proportions... still a deliciously fresh approach. Hope you've got more up your sleeve ...or oozing from your pen...
Okay, so I know these "thrown together" stories are fun, & some of them manage to pull off hot, which parts of your's does, but in reading this again I just can't get past the crazy earthquake thing. The writer here treats them as if they are a tornado or another similar natural disaster. Having truly actually grown up in earthquake country (& been through 'the big one' in '89), I can tell you earthquakes just happen. People stand in doorways, stay away from windows or anything that might fall on them. In a really big quake you actually fill all the bathtubs & sinks with water in case it gets shut off later. Usually when an earthquake happens everyone asks each other if the other person felt it, tries to guess what it was on the richter scale, picks anything up that fell down & go about their business. Your writing is fun but even with trying for a suspension of disbelief, I just need a little more plausibility. Next time pick a natural disaster you know, or you can use writers forum or an editor.
SF Bay Girl
(btw I'm not voting b/c me being nit-picky about my where I grew up has nothing to do with your writing ability & I'd never sabatoge someone's score like that)
This is one of the best stories of read so far. I hope you come up with ch.2 soon
Luv mom-son incest stories! Especially liked the daughter finding out and being charged by it. Please continue and toss some mother-daughter sex in for good measure!
This a great story like my four time reading, but need more. Like Sophie saiding it was the hottest she ever saw. I like to see mom said I know you should try it youself you like it also.
I loved your work it has the feel of a great hentai and captures the essence of hotness
Although not without a chance to grow, but I loved hot quickly the story got reactor hot! I have a few points to critic but your awesome score tells me the majority of people would change a thing on this one:
1) I got very worried that the mom was going to become paralyzed for a second.
There was a point where she gets hurt from the second quake that scared me.
2) The Father/Husband was out of town half way through.
Why not use that to fertilize the mom's scenario from the beginning with say some hot build up. (She could have been masturbating heavily ever since her husband left to enhance her side of the sexual hunger. Maybe she mentions that she is kind of laud in climax and hope she hasn't bothered he kids with her 'self help'
3) Maybe add that the son was also masturbating heavily.
He could have been venting sexual frustration in the shower because his mom was causing too many hard-ons with her recent laud masturbation.
I hope this reads more like a wish list and less of a bitch list because your writing is hot! I like your desire to explain the reason scenarios but wish for more emotions and descriptions of sexual turmoil and lustful need in the characters! I love sexual tension and reluctance to lust with eventual submission! HOT! You have serious skills! Please keep these stories coming! and us too! ;-)
this is my FAVORITE story (: like of all stories, ever. it's just awesome. I think the reason i love so much is because it was actually, completely accidental. it wasnt until it was happening that the mom started to enjoy it.
Got my pussy dripping wet...I need more pleaseeee write moreee..so sexy that they accidentally fucked..getting horny again just thinking about it!!!
You need to keep writing incest stories this is one of the best stories here, hey check out "Persuading Shy Mom to Pose by byoptocynic©" for inspiration and moreeeee stories please...
(and part2 of this one of course)
why have you stopped writing..you should write more parts of this story...this is hot
You have an amazing sense of humour.
Its the first time ever that I laughed as hard as I came, reading a story!
I'm looking forward to lots more such fantastic stories from you. Keep up the good work.
Oh, this has got to be one of the better ones.
Hopefully there will be follow ups.
Is mom pregnant perhaps?
lol truly funny,, i think you could of made several follow ups on this one like how the mum and son continued after without the sister known then they seduced her into the sex games as well :P
Can imagine myself in exactly that position, with equally gratifying results.
but if you pretend it's a bout soem teen and his milfy nabour it's a good story.
This isn't just a good piece of erotic fiction it is a good piece of writing overall. I really enjoyed it!
Wow! Cant believe it but this is the kind of story i never get tired of reading!!! Just hope they'll be a second installment...
the mother is now pregnent is sis is soon to be i don't need to say i liked your story first tome leaving coment your story is the best
I have to agree with WOW's comment. I have read this, thought of this and put myself in the bottom of the tube so many times that I have probably cum enough to fill a tub...
Great story!
i think i have jacked so many times reading this story that it might b a recored... i have read it quite a few times... and every time it makes me so hot...
This is exactly the type of story i look for! Where a mother and son are forced into accidentally having sex. And while having sex, they want to give in to the sensation, but they don't at first, cause they feel it's wrong. But then they give in, to the point where they want to do it regularly.
The point is not whether this is a realistic scenario that could really happen (if that was the case, the majority of stories on Lit would be blown out of the water).
The point is whether or not this is a highly erotic story. Judging from my "trusty friend's" reaction, I would say it is.
Thank you.
Keep the stories coming; those two were very well done! Loved the originality of it all!
Story was hot, but you've obviously never been in an earthquake, nor do you know anything about them. You don't get a warning, you don't have a safe room built into your house for them, and they rarely last longer than 15 seconds or so.
Where is the followup to this story you promised us? Sophie sounds ready.lol
Damn, this is the first time I blow my load on a story on this site. Would love to see a part 2 in a similar way e.g. earthquake again, fire or whatever! Anyway, a great combination of lust and emotions together. Great great story!
I blew my biggest load ever while reading your story. Please write more, in the same style as this one. Great job!!!
Great story write more incest stuff. will you write a part 2. hope so unprodected sex with 30 something mom could mean impregnation and what about Sis.
Good story, fun sex. As a new member, I have to wonder why most criticisms are made by this "Anonymous " person. (thats said "tongue in cheek" so dont criticize me too)..LOL..Please bring on the sequel Skei0..
very original idea / situation. The combination of uncontrolable situations, lust, and voyeurism was pure genious! I can't wait to read more from you!
That was really hot. My wife and I loved it.
The use of the safe room and the earthquake was super.
We look forward to more from you.
B and A
Brilliant story. A novel idea and very well written. Much better than a lot of other stories I've read which tend to be of the "he did this and then she did that" style.
As one of the other cooments said, the characters are well developed and it would be a shame not to take things further (Sophie/husband/does the mum have a sister?!)