All Comments on 'Vicious Pt. 03'

Ok I'm little surprised by this story but really that's the ending it was a little disappointing it had a good start before your ending hurt it

terrific!!

Enjoyed the story , however I feel there it would benefit from a proper ending

Enjoyable read but needs a proper ending

Loved this story. Miss Kitty would have been proud…

Good series....waiting for Part 04 and more....5,6,7,and beyond?

Excessive and unnecessary, not at all sure how this will all be resolved.

Not sure why this chapter was added, it's totally off topic and is so depressing. Since Bridget was never mentioned in the first two chapters, this just seems to be an after thought. I don't read rape stories unless they are snuck in like this one was. Got me wondering what Ryan was doing in England? Now he's glob trotting looking for another "family" member to save, who knows? Had to grad this chapter down.

5 stars, wonderful story. Please continue with this series. Maybe, with Ryan and Linda's help and guidance, Bridget may have a good life, maybe get married and have a family. Being a mother would complete her transformation. Sadly, this main theme, is not total fiction, people with no other choice may be used like this...SHAME.

don't leave us hanging... please continue

Do you realize you just changed Ryan's backstory from chapter 1? All three chapters are either out of order or in conflict with each other

Another home run

MORE PLEASE !!

I would love to read about the revenge Ryan takes on the Joes and the others.

Where’s the revenge part?

Where did this chapter come from? Incongruous with his backstory. Really harsh and dark.

Fffffff************kkkk!!!!!!!

Real tale of grounded Peoples

Waiting for more

Rated 5*

I loved it, as you don't really hear about fictional characters previous lives very much. Oh sure Ryan mentioned some of his at the beginning of the first chapter. I thought it was a well written heartfelt story. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Needs another chapter. Good work. Thanks.

I'm with earlier anon comment. While I'm happy Bridget's suffering is over, this NEEDS a next chapter, ending all the abusers involved.

That’s it? Last chapter?

Like the last 2 parts it’s ended in mid air, very unsatisfactory.

This part really got silly

just dumb, some sick fantasy and not much to do with part 1 and 2.

really hoped the bear would pay the joe's a visit.

Not sure what the point of this chapter was or why it was even needed. One would have thought that if this character was so important to Ryan, he would have mentioned her at least once in the previous two chapters. Adding her seemingly at random was pointless.