All Comments on 'Victoria'

Another winner!

5

So good = you are a superb author

Another great story.

Now you've got to tell Marsha's story.

Superb, but then all of your stuff usually is.

Short but a lot of relevant detail. Excellent.

Nice :) Another good story. Thank you

Very good...as usual. Five stars.

WONDERFUL STORY, 10 stars! Please write another chapter. Vicky loves Jack and he loves her. He can make an honest woman of her, as his wife, and the mother of his son and daughter... I just love your stories!

Really an emotional journey. That's what makes your stories, the connection with your characters, their honesty. Easy to get into the story if you want to be the character.

Thanks!

So just how big a whore was Vicky, you left that key part out. Always using condoms doesn't really redeem her in any way. I wanted to like her but without that background I just couldn't do it, sorry.

Another excellent story. I hope that we hear more of Jack and Vicky's exploits. This was a Five Star tale.

Never in all my years of watching Dragnet did the dective finish the episode with a girl on his arm. Yeah I remember Dragnet, Can’t help it. It sorta set the stage for all that followed. But as a plus you never said “just the facts ma’am.”

The good doctor was right, Vicky was a keeper. I really liked the whole story, and the fact Vicky was an escort didn’t have any problems for me. Another story wouldn’t hurt my feelings with Vicky and Jack, just saying’.

Beautiful story! They needed each other!!

Very good; well-written and interesting. I always enjoy your stories.

Could you possibly do me a great favor and look up the meaning of the word 'discrete'? It doesn't mean 'discreet'.

Little too formulaic but I did feel warm and fuzzy when I finished reading it. LOL! 4.3*

Delightful characters .... I hope they will make a return in future stories about the investigations they are able to pull off.

People with different back grounds ad different needs (like tuition) can make mistakes. The question becomes, what is the real nature of the person. The story is a good reminder not to judge a book by it's cover. Throw in a side story of delicious revenge and Ronde has given us something special.

The Hoary Cleric

HIGHLY RECOMMENDED READ!!!

A classmate and I sat in the back row of a class as high school juniors. The teacher was boring and droned on from his notes. An A was easy if one read the textbook, so we talked about life. On day the discussion was about: 'Could I marry a girl who was not a virgin?'

My friend became became a tenured professor of philosophy at a major university. Smart man.

Are mutual opinion - We wanted to marry a woman for who she was and what we would be together for the rest of our lives, and not based on her having a 'perfect past.'

Ronde - this was a beautiful; story perfectly illustrating that discussion. Thanks