All Comments on 'Victoria and Piper'

That is where you left us. Hanging, searching for answers that needed to come. What happened in those weeks? Victoria doesn't ask? She has been around too long not to know how often new parolees get sucked back into their pasts.

And speaking of that, why does Victoria have to guess how old Piper is? As a social worker meeting a client she would have access to Piper's entire file, no guess, she would know. . .

You left out what happened to Piper. What had her in the state she was in, why she didn't call for 3wks, and what had her sobbing and scared like she was? Maybe you could write another story continuing this one that explains all that and maybe how thing affect and progress in their relationship? This story has so much potential to be so more than a quick roll in the hay. This could be like so many other stories on here that are an actual story that grips you and you connect with the characters so well and can't stop reading till the end cuz you just have to see how things end. Most of the stories in the hall of fame list are like that. I would say 95% of them are like that. At least their lesbian sex hall of fame list is like that. You could make this into multiple chapters like so many stories on here are even. I would love to read a full story on the questions I all ready asked. As well as how Piper adjust to living in the outside, how Vic helps her, their struggles together, and how it all comes together at the end for them. It's just a suggestion that you can think over and it's up to you. I just thought I would throw it out there and you can think it over. Thanks

Just out of curiosity: I think there is unfinished business in this story. Wish you would go ahead and continue the tail of Piper and Victoria.