All Comments on 'Victoria's Secret: Hotel Hooker!'

Not bad. A fun little story. Tends to feel quite offhand being her narration the whole time and could use with a little more flushing out of a few details. Pretty good though!

Nice rendering of the topic. Did she catch an STD and pass it to Randolph?

Hoping there is a part 2. Maybe Randolph and his friends unknowingly show up where Vicki is working.

Vicky Getting Into Another Situation as a Whore (This Time) was Very Entertaining! Randolph and Vicky are Going to Keep her Humiliations Going? LOL!

You did leave out what birth control she used. If it was the pill, she skipped two or three from working Friday night to Sunday afternoon. I wonder if she will end up pregnant from that, and how she felt when she realized she could not take her daily pill? I wonder if she would abort or take to term, and see a black trick baby pop out of her whore womb!

Perhaps add that to an expanded version, or a second part where Randolf has her whore herself again to a pimp? Very nice situation, semiconsensual prostitution.

PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK - MORE!

Wish there was a part 2

Hey Joe, tried to post at Victoria the War Whore comments, but they only let you do one, then you have to register. My eye sight is so bad I tried five time to enter the code, then gave up. So I'm posting it here.

Joe, I can't stop thinking about more to Victoria's story. Between the flashbacks of the occupation and moving forward there is some much potential. You mentioned Victoria's husband, how far into the future is that? A lot of the ideas are revolving around Victoria being put back to work on her back and on her knees. As history shows a lot of the British colonies broke off to become independent after the war, the Island Nation could follow that path or threaten to. Appeasement to local government rule might be a factor in making Victoria comply to local police prostitution registration and work requirements. The three stories that I think most likely to be possible in real life is this one, Going Native-Gone Native and An Easier Way. I like most when a story has a thin line from suspension of disbelief, and these fit the bill. I would like to read a sequel to anyone of them. I have been updating the Victoria the War Whore photo Album on Strip Search 4. A lot of my ideas come from your stories. -orflash64