All Comments on 'Victoria's Secrets Ch. 01'

Fabulous! Well written! I love the premise of the story. Good job of making the characters realistic. Nice use of innuendo without being too ridiculous. I look forward to more chapters of this story.

Please do not stop writing, very few have your talents, Thank you

Sexy and very enjoyable story. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting premise.

Sex moves along much to automatically, though.

And sex seems to happen in very public places -- where a hell of a lot happens in what couldn't be more than 30 seconds -- yet no mention of other peope around, and not even any concern about being seen.

Fout stars.