All Comments on 'Victoria's Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I'm Heartbroken. . .

I wanted them to live happily ever after. Nevertheless, this was a six-star story. Excellent work.

ealexerealexerover 3 years ago
Great work

So much like real life.

It hurts and life goes on.

Choices have to be made.

JabonieJabonieover 3 years ago
Very good

You really have to add more chapters. Really good writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
jezus

how many pages do you need to write she seduced him with a false pregnancy?

Pharmboy69Pharmboy69over 3 years ago

F Ruth, typical lawyer. Haha, great writing, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow!

Wow! hard not to see only tragedy ahead. I am sorry, but I do not trust Ruth. Please continue this love story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Swooning for Victoria.

I hope she's real.

Fuzzy_KbearFuzzy_Kbearover 3 years ago

was 5 star till the ending. dropped to 3.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Sequel needed. The suspence of this open end is rather unsatisfying.

BabyGirlLovesYouBabyGirlLovesYouabout 1 year ago

Please continue! I need to know what happens!! D;

CharlieWanderingCharlieWandering10 months ago

An amazingly beautiful story. Erotic and so very tender.

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Longer time Lit reader who has only just begun submitting stories. Likely to explore multiple genres, unless no one like my stuff. (May 2020) Update: Have now submitted six stories. It has been even more interesting and gratifying than I expected. It is wonderful to have...