All Comments on 'Victory Is Mine'

Nice story

Wow, I LOVE your story! I very much hope you write up more story chronicles of the arrogant, but wanting Victory. I can't wait to read more of her perilous escapades!

that was hot and so amazing, thanks

I'm not used to laughing when I read noncon, but this story is hilarious. Superhero meets damsel in distress is a great combination, and your take on it is pitch perfect. I hope you write more adventures.

What scintillating salacious stories of sexual surrender! Tune in next time, True Believers, for more tales of the vivacious voluptuous Victory! Excelsior!

Sorry, I couldn't resist. Great stuff that certainly earns you a No-prize! (I'm such a comic book geek)

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I appreciate all the great comments and feedback I'm receiving! Thank you all so much and its so flattering just to have my stuff read...

This particular story was co-written by a wonderful author called the Centurion and he deserves half (if not more) of the credit here...a very special thanks to him!

More to come soon and I hope you'll all continued to provide such feedback, THANKS AGAIN!

the trick is to conceal it. TK U MLJ LV NV

The best non consent story I have ever read. Thank you to both of you for writing and sharing.

Victory is a bimbo superheroine...hahaha..

I hope there will be more of Victory and the Centurion.

I like the dance scene, very erotic :-)

i hope there is more to cum! An idea for character development if ur getting bored; this female is well suited to the anime conceptual girl type Tsundere if u planed to write the characterless into an approximation of a relationship it's something worth googling if ur not familiar and would play well with the dynamics u put in the air so far in fact depending on how u write her feelings about the submission, admissions, and public humiliation ur like all ready done creating the circumstance and stage for a delightfully petulant hot Tsundere chick... its all been awesome so far so what ever u do as long as theres more ill be happy and im sure will be a fun read.. thx!

After all, she rarely seems to have a Victory.

There's no evil queen in sleeping beauty.

A great, fun story with lots of hot noncon sex. I enjoyed how they knew each battle was a match for her body. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for the work.

Great story lined, but she was way to easily defeated in this story. This almost reads like a Dangerguy Duster story. Centurion was to much of a tease, he defeated her to easily. Especially in the final chapters. She needs to have a different power source , because all Ms Amazing who has a power device around her waist also, as does most of her superheroine friends. Duster is the only one that has her powers within. Victory needs to be better than the other type of Superheroines. And the motorcycle seems to be a takeoff from Scorpion Woman to some extent. It would be nice to have this special lady be different. Her power belt should not be so easily removed. As are her arm defense. She need inproments to be different from the other superheroine characters out there.

Hi its been a while but can we expect any new encounter s between the two... especially one that would last longer...maybe for an year or two where she is held captive