All Comments on 'Video Vixen'

Good story. Nice work! ^__^

encore... fantastic... encore... fantastic... encore... fantastic..........

i've didn't :-) even read :-) all of :-) it yet :-)........... bits&pieces :-)

here+there :-) on&off :-)............... bravoooooooooooooooooo

Love your excellent father daughter stories. Thanks and hope for more

Hopefully love always shows in a father/daughter scenario, but this goes far beyond love, to adoration, devotion, and appreciation....I second BRAVO...had I ever had sex with one of my daughters, I would hope it was with such care and concern and just plain family fun.

Really good story, I for one would like to see more like this.

The edit is obvious. Nice lead-up, story development etc. Good job.

Well done as usual, author.

Thanks for one of the best father/daughter incest tales I have read in a long time. Just outstanding!

Another excellent story from one of the best authors on this site. Thanks for your efforts RW2!

FUB

You know just how take care of your baby girl.

Another fab story, my dear daddy! Thank you for this lovely New Year's gift! Truly brightened my day. Can't wait for you to pen one of our rendez-vous!! Kisses!!

Thats not just a story its a book. If you could just get pass the fact its a daughter and remove that part, perhaps a daughters girlfriend . It would be a VERY good book.

Thanks for the heads up on the ANAL. It is just not my cup of tea. Best of luck on all your stories.

Joe

great story, well written

Awesome job with this story. One of my favorites for sure.

Really enjoy this story.

I really loved this story - VERY HOT. Loved the small touches - like the hearts on her bra & panties and her gasping: "gonna cum, daddy". OMG.....

I read through some of your other stories and you are a very talented writer...keep up the great work!

Your stories just get better and better.

Thaxs alot I want u to be my daddy one day .... This is amazing i fingered my self while reading .... AWESOME !!!

Good build up with a fairly believable storyline. Slightly predictable that he would take her virginity but the camcorder at the end was a brilliant touch. Awesome detail and I loved the anal part. You don't see it often in that kind of detail. Keep up the good work.

Great story, definitely got my juices flowing! Just one thing the word Candidly was over used throughout the entire story, it became a bit of annoyance for me, personally. Other than that it was amazing!

I loved it, I loved it so much!

Really love it, hope to see more anal antics!

This is a fantastic story - the build up was amazing and I loved the video ending. I agree with a previous comment about the word "candidly" being overused but other than that ... fab. This story has made me so horny

That was really great, love the story.

Speechless, it was THAT good.

Have read a few of your stories; each have been amazing! Still love "daddy's naughty box" the most, but this & the others i've read have all been 5 star quality, in my opinion. Thank you!!!

Watch out for how frequently you use the word 'candidly' - you're leaning on it. Composition is far more important than your vocab choices.

Loved it. Almost thirty years ago I found polaroids in my yougest daughter's room...It was innocent, I was fixing her bookshelf and had to unload the books...4 polaroids in her world book encylopedia...one had peaked out. Tame stuff...her naked on her own bed...posed...evident that someone had taken them of her. I jerked off to them right then and there. And many times afterword...they disappeared after she got engaged...would have loved to have on still.

This story is absolutely amazing and could easily be true-to-life. I am in love with this sexy girl just based on her physical attributes and beauty alone. Your descriptors of her create a fantastic visual image. Combine that with her sexual appetite and youth and we get a 5-star experience! 5 Stars. Great writing. Thanks!

Good story. FYI, the past tense for grind is ground not grinded - Dad has absolutely no self control - Shannon instantly went from mortified weeping girl to uninhibited slut coming on to her dad. Not consistent with the development of her character - No hymen? - 4/5 . . . .