All Comments on 'Vikings and Nuns'

"I gripped my solid iron axe in my hands." Who else's hands would you grip it with? I know I should have given the story more of a chance but that first line threw me for a loop. I see that you're brand new so I wish you well, maybe take a little time to investigate sentence structure.

Your bio says you're bi, if so, you ought to know there isn't a man alive who can ejaculate repeatedly as you've described. The seminal vesicle and prostrate cannot reproduce the fluid necessary for an ejaculation that quickly. I know it's your fantasy and story but there needs to be a hint of realism. Either that or put it in sci-fi.

This has potential for a follow-up piece as well as lots of room for getting inside their heads. 4 of 5 from me.

A good concept, but his thoughts and descriptions seemed to be too modern for an ancient Viking.

So you might reset the period, or make it non-specific...so it could be moder n or future, or even another world.

Can sexy Ragnar have a bit of sexy dark chest hair his muscular body?

***Thanks for the read.

Nice story, very erotic.

Lucky Ragnar! She somehow had the power to drain him time and again and yet keep him ready to service her. Lovely sex scenes. More, please?