All Comments on 'Violet & Sydney Vol. 01'

Couldn't really get into this one. I think all of the "Mmmm" in the beginning put me off, like, please can you use another expression. I skimmed the last half and saw there was plenty of action sexually. Thank you Lesbianic lover for your time and effort

The story shifts between first person and third person, sometimes within the same sentence. Please pick one or the other and stick with it throughout the story. For a minute there, I thought it was a story about a threesome ;)

Would go into detail more but loved it

Please continue. This was a little short.