by Meliawen
This story made me all squirmy inside. It had enough reluctance to make it *very* exciting for me. Well done, can't wait to read more.
yeah...that was really ally I had to say other than that I agreed with the other person.
The carriage ride was a novel idea and the whole set up is hot. I'm sure I'm going to enjoy the next chapters, too.
I've never commented before but feel i have to this is one of the best storiesI've read online and i return to it again and again i would adore another 20 chapters i implore yout to write more if at all possible thankyou so much