All Comments on 'Virgin Airman'

I loved the history, and how it was prolonged. Very Hot!!! I would have liked more of a climactic ending, but I'm just being greedy. I'd love to read more stories of a similar nature.

I loved this story too. It reminded me very much of my own story except that I was in the army a few years later. It's just so pleasant to read an account of gay people behaving like human beings and not super heroes who are super hung, super muscled etc etc. Yes, it 'hot' too and all the more so for the element of romance in it!

This thing took forever to get to the point and then it did a terrible job at that.

It was an amazing story, and the length of it didn't bother me at all. The only suggestion I have is to have made the climactic ending a little bit longer. I did love the fact that the ending love scene was mostly dialogue, I've never seen that before in an erotic story.

Too long winded and not enough sex

you talk too much, 3 pages to get to sex and it has minimal description.