All Comments on 'Virgin's Lessons'

That has to be the best "first time" story I have evr read

awesome work.. out of five stars, i give you ten.. keep it up!

The diction, punctuation, and grammar in this work were all of decent quality, but...

I didn't buy it. First, no 18 year old girls are going to be unaware of what sex is. I very much doubt any girl (or boy) over the age of 13 or 14 years old will be unaware.

Second, girls that are 18, whether or not they aware of the dynamics of sexual intercourse, are not going to give themselves to a stranger.

Third, most 18 year old girls have moved past the "giggling and making silly dares" phase. That gets back to maturity, though, which I already pointed out, to an extent, in my first assertion.

Write credibly and believably; it displays a greater understanding of writing, the subject of the writing, and life as a whole.

Awesome man!!!!!!!!!

Good story, I think that teh girls were obviously younger in your mind, but the laws the law!!!! Lets have more

Great story, ignore the idiot who says the realism is crap, I loved it and dont need realism in a fantasy!

I think when he says they are 18, it doesn't take a fool to realize that they aren't actually 18 and he only mentioned that to make sure he doesn't encourage pedophilia.

Chances are the 2 girls are actually round about 14...

That is the best story I have read on this site. please write more

Damn that is a hot story, lets have a sequal

Is there going to be a continuation of this story and if so when can I look forward to it because this was amazing I reread it every night before bed

Just one lucky guy. Two sore girls.