All Comments on 'Viridian Sands'

I get that autor intends to expand the world, but still i get the feeling like its a "filler"story. No character development compared to longer stories. Story itself is rather flat and offers very low obstacles for the characters to overcome. One of the least "fun" stories of this universum for me though.

I enjoyed the trip back to Borealis. It was a straight forward tail and your writing skills made the twenty pages fly by. Thanks

Good world building. There was a large filler to fucking ratio in my opinion, but it did build up tension.

Far too much story and not enough action or sex

Loved it 😍

I'm only on page 2 and I'm loving this world.

Thank you snekguy. I really enjoyed this sequel to rebellion and your tying in figures from your other worlds.

Stories in this verse are always interesting for more than the sex. I mean, the sex is always hot, but the sociology is *fascinating*.

Just for getting back to the Rask story, 5 stars before even reading.

ust out-fucking standing!!!!! I love your stories. When will we get one with Evan and Jade having kids and loving each other as much as they do in that story??? PLEASE!!

Thank you for another excellent submission. I love the way you always tie everything together with your other stories.

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Anuddah Winnah!

11/10!!!!!

OooRah, another great story from SG. Back in my days in the Corps, we didn't have Big Cats, we had LBFM's to party with. Five Stars just ain't enough, Semper Fi.

Love your stories. Please keep them coming. Wish I was there

Once again you produced a great story. You are one of my top ten favorite authors. I would like to see how this continues. Does he stay, how does he fit in with the pack more long term, how would life change if he becomes a permanent fixture in the pack. This story could definitely benefit from a part 2. Can't wait to visit the next installment of Snekguy's universe.

Good story. Maybe rushed at the end

I liked it. Missed the pew pews though. It seems this was very soon (maybe a year) after the rebellion? I would love a glimpse of how the Rask have done from 15-20 yrs from this...

Love your stories that feature Borelians. A sequel to this one would definitely do wonders.

Please make a part 2!

Maybe Ramos can rise to sn Alpha?

This was amazing! I love all of the stories that take place in this universe.

Loved the sex with aliens. The logic of this universe is solid and the characters seem real. Let's see the pack works with Ramos AND another Rask added. A young Rask male would add an interesting twist to the pack dynamics and could be a challenge to Ramos's sexual preferences.