All Comments on 'Virtual Life Experience Pt. 03'

also, I agree with 4boots -- great movie potential (buut you need creative control so it stays close to what you wrote!)

@oldpantythief: good stories weave multiple, interlocking threads. This one shows all the signs of that happening.

What was the threesome about? Not sure how that fit into the story, besides just adding more sex or maybe as a filler. Looking forward to more story.

We've gone from the physical and survival

to dark and psychotic

Not the same story any more

Seriously, this plot would make for a great movie....

Zack was trying to be discreet

There was some dissension

It has been submitted for approval. Expect it to post within the next three days or so. There will be a Chapter 5 to follow (at least).

This story is so good, highly addictive. Would you please consider adding some updates on your bio page regarding when the next part (notice I said next and NOT final) might be available? Keep up the good work!

I admit I am hooked on this story and look forward to another chapter! I don't know how you can conclude this with only one more chapter. I think it could go on for several more!

It's getting really good so five stars this time, looking forward to the next chapter.

loved your series. completely hooked to it.

when will you put ch4?

if you have rough idea when you will be able to complete it.