All Comments on 'Visitation Rights Pt. 01'

Very nicely done. Five stars.

Painted an erotic picture with words but it ended too quickly. Next time draw it out like an orgasm you want to delay so the pleasure doesn't recede too quickly.

This was paced just as it should be; fast. It was a quickee, plain & simple. Good story.

I appreciate the kind words. It was meant to be a quickie and am glad that that came across.

Nice job, I liked it a lot!