All Comments on 'Vodka: Cinnamon'

Fun and games in big L!

5

Fantastic! Great story, short and sweet! Five stars! Thanks Jimbob44.

Poignant set of character quick sketches. Two struggling teens - Bobby and Mindy, and three drifting adults - Daisy, Tom, and Paula. Impressively rendered, especially for such a quick story. Thanks for your words.

You know, as soon as you write it isn't meant to be taken seriously, certain posters are going to start sharpening their sabers to rattle. Better gird your loins.😆

5★

Three JB stories in two days? We're not worthy. But the stories are...of 5/5 stars. Always a pleasure to see a new JB byline.

Dewey Cheatham

Great story about life

It's the usual rutting trying escape the death void at first and then the characters POP and where it goes only JimBob44 knows.

Full marks *****

More great characters with a sort of surprise twist...nice!

Too sad for me.

Is it possible to do a sequel to see if Daisy keeps the baby, or terminates. AA sounds like a great solution. She sounds like a smart savvy woman. Help her have a good follow up with a decent sober person in her life, not a drunk get together.

"I'm just here get my fucking papers signed". I have read all of nimbly stories.... But this last line has me puzzled.... Maybe somebody can explain it to me?

***Thanks for the read.

@dardef many times drunk drivers will get bail conditions like having weekly or monthly signatures from AA administrators stating that they're attending meetings.

Once again JB posts a real life story. This could have for right on with the Trailer Park series. I do hope you give us part duce off Daisys life. 5*****

Well written and quick but make me think will see more of MC in the future- if the mood strikes JimBob44 🤔. Worth time for his writing pleasure and my reading enjoyment.

Please do keep writing for your pleasure and I will keep reading for my enjoyment!👍🏻

Daisy sounds delicious 😜😜😜😜😜 if she teases more , Daisy would put the lust minded into a frenzy. Great story