All Comments on 'Vodka: Green Apple'

Is the next one peach?

As in every one of his stories, JimBob brings the characters to life - they seem to be real, complete, complex people. That’s why the story deserves 5 stars.

I do think that the transition from Terri telling Eli that she was pregnant to the AA meeting was too abrupt, though. Lots of things going on in the time between those events that are just skipped over. While it worked, it could have worked better by covering some of them.

I loved the warmth and the realness and of course the happy ending. Great job!

How about writing a story about who is in the 5th trailer?

Other people on this site try to write about sex. Jimbob44 writes about people... who sometimes have sex. That's why his stories are engrossing, entertaining and readable.

I wholeheartedly loved that this story was not just about sex.

As a recovering alcoholic I recognized her issue an as I kept reading, hoped for a different ending (based on this site).

Well thought out an written.....

I'm adding this story as a favorite because it did turn me on, made me get angry at Terri....it made me sad for her.....however it brought a smile to my face at the end.

GREAT JOB

I've been in recovery for 13 years. This story was fantastic and exactly the way it is.

I'm an alcoholic I got the 18 years sober. I appreciate this story. Thank you!