All Comments on 'Voice of the Goddess'

Unique, well written, and so so hot

@ Anonymous; ditto.

With an opening act like that... you know what's coming next, so I won't bother you by writing it out here.

Really good work, nicely done.

More?

Wonderful riff on a little used trope. Ome small mistake. How would Lialeth know what manna is? Unless this is Earth in another epoch, your OT reference would have no meaning.

This story reminds me of a scene from season two of Castle. Beckett scolds Rick for “touching things that aren’t meant to be touched.” The priestess should have heeded Kate’s advice. 🤪

A delicious start...!