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"Huh? Oh..." Chelsea tried to shake the last of the fog from her head. "Yeah, I'm fine."
"Are you sure? You looked like you were pretty, um, y'know...out of it." Veronica bit her lip, concerned. "Did he actually...?"
Chelsea's face flushed. "What? No, of course not!" she scoffed, hoping to cover the panic rising inside her. "I just pretended I was hypnotized to mess with him. Did you really think he turned me into some mindless zombie just by saying a few words?"
"I guess that is pretty stupid," Veronica admitted, abashed. "So...that part where he told you to be a puppy..."
"Did you see the way he freaked out when I tried to lick him? Priceless!" Chelsea laughed. "I just wish I could be there when that perv tries it on another girl."
Veronica's eyes lit up. "Ohmigod. He probably thinks he has some kind of super power right now. Chelsea, that's so mean!"
Chelsea bowed with a grin. "All in a day's work."
"I can't believe I actually thought he actually hypnotized you. I mean, can you imagine?"
Could Chelsea imagine what?
Could she imagine that Seb had put her into a hypnotic trance, just with the power of his voice?
Could she imagine him doing it again?
Could she imagine him taking her deeper, molding her thoughts and feelings to his liking?
Could she imagine him whispering away all the cares and concerns, stripping her of all pride, dignity, and free will until she was just a helpless, horny slave?
Could she imagine becoming a mindless toy at his disposal, ready to be used any way he saw fit?
"Ew, no," she lied.
- COMMENTS
HakoHakoabout 1 year agoI'm pretty sure @SophieTurner is wrong about Vox Dominus being a plagiarism. Instead, the other work copied Vox Dominus. The website of the "original author" says their story was posted in 2018 but the domain wasn't registered until 2022.
In chapter 11 of the "original story" the main character named Harry is in a conversation with a girl named Luna. The girl is then referred to as Tiffany before being referred to as Luna again. Harry also tires to introduce himself as "Se-" before using a false name (Michael). Chapter 11 of the "original story" was copied from Chapter 9 of Vox Dominus because Harry (from the original story) was going to call himself Seb (Vox Dominus' main character name). The "original story" would of have had Harry say "Ha-" for Harry instead of "Se-" so I'm pretty sure the replace word function was looking for the word Seb. The "original story" having a character's name change from Luna to Tiffany and back to Luna makes me think that Vox Dominus is the original story.
There's also the fact that Vox Dominus is completed while the original story is not completed. I also could not find the "original author's" recordings on Pornhub nor YouTube. The "original author" seems to be Polish so maybe the recordings did not show up for me because I'm searching in English so if anyone has more information please let me know. I can't believe I spent 40mins going down this dumb rabbit hole.
Anonymousover 1 year ago@SophieTurner, could you please give more proof of what author he/she stole from? I couldn't find anything on pornhub.
SophieTurnerover 1 year agoIt's a plagiarism, I read the story before it was published here. The story was created in 2018 and was published on the girl's blog and she read by the author on pornhub and youtube. I spoke to the author, she admitted that she doesn't have an account here and has never been posted here. user Merciless harasses the author, praises sexual violence and steals stories.
