All Comments on 'Vox Dominus Pt. 02'

Very yummy indeed! I love where this is going! Thank you!

I added you to my watch list so please keep writing

Really great story. Very hot. You might want to look up the words "compliment" and "complement."

I liked the first chapter a lot, this one didnt disapoint me, you write well and give depth to the persona of your character . Yet one reserve, the duality of chelsea make her incredibly arousing I hope you are not going to make her an empty puppet.

... to say the least!

I also like the start of this story seems to be going.

However, I hope this isn't one of those stories where insecure mc-guy follows up his conquest of subject girl by sharing her with his pals. I personally hate that!

Love it, looking forward to future installments!!

I really like the storyline and how the characters are developing. I look forward to many more chapters.

Hopefully Seb gets so much action he has to share the girls with his pals. I love that.

ok but not a lot happened

It's a plagiarism, I read the story before it was published here. The story was created in 2018 and was published on the girl's blog and she read by the author on pornhub and youtube. I spoke to the author, she admitted that she doesn't have an account here and has never been posted here. user Merciless harasses the author, praises sexual violence and steals stories.

@SophieTurner You don't need to keep repeating that. Where did you also see that "Merciless harasses the author [and] praises sexual violence"? and who is "the girl" that is supposedly the original author?

I really hope Chelsea is a virgin. It would be so perfect and actually in line with the picture painted so far for her master to claim her as his own, before any other has tainted her, and have her remain his loyal, devoted and obedient servant forever. But she has to be aware of it and desire it, too; not just be some mindless slave in the end, as that's no fun. Wonder what the deal with Sophia is? I'm sure I'll find out soon enough.

Funny. And hot, which can be hard to mix.

My best guess is Sophie is this person who stole the story, trying to discredit this one.