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Click hereElise checked her watch, already in the process of moving on from this encounter. "I've installed a special little program to ensure this doesn't happen again. If you try and contact Chelsea, I'll know. If you so much as search her name, I'll know. If you try and remove or circumvent the program, I'll know. At which point your will go from being an annoyance, to being a problem." Her eyes narrowed. "One I will take great pains to resolve. Understand?"
Seb did, all too well. "B-but we share classes together. What if we have to share notes or complete a group assignment?"
"That won't be happening," Elise stated, standing and throwing on her coat. "Chelsea will be departing the country with me on Monday, for a special, private internship with my company. By the time she returns, I should hope you'll have moved on with your pathetic little life. Otherwise..."
She let the threat dangle, not even sparing another glance as she marched past him towards the exit. Seb stared as though she were a shark passing in the water, his racing heart unsure if he had really escaped death or not. She strode to Chelsea's table, exchanging a few words with the downcast girl before gesturing towards the exit.
That's when Chelsea's eyes met his. And his heart seized.
He had only seen this expression once before: the depths of pain and longing in her wavering gaze, her lips parting ever so slightly to ask for help, even as she lacked the hope to do so. It was the same Chelsea he had glimpsed in the grad library—the same scared, lonely girl trying to break free from her mother's shell.
It was only there for a moment, before she turned and followed her captor towards the door. But it was enough to ignite Seb into action, forcing him to his feet.
"Elise, wait," he called.
To his surprise, she did so, her icy countenance once again fixing on his. But he held his ground, refusing to let the flames inside him subside.
"You're making a mistake," he said. "You can't force her to be someone she's not."
Elise's eyelids twitched, like deadly cracks in a frozen lake. "She is a Jaeger," the matriarch stated simply. "And you are nothing."
Her bodyguards stepped in after that, blocking the two women from view as they exited. The last he saw of Chelsea was a flicker of her shadow in the sunlight, before her mother's eclipsed it.
And then they were gone.
My biggest problem isn't that he's weak, but that he enslaved Sophia despite her definitely not asking for it, and having no idea if it would turn out well or she'd be brain dead. Just wildly goes against everything else he's done.
Man this MC is so weak. Lets her walk all over him and he's the one with the powers? I don't get it. I just don't. It seems too contrived to just let her get her way when he has the power to stop it. Or at the very least make an attempt. Well at least the story is almost over. It's dragged on for far too long anyway without much of anything happening. Conquering the campus my ass.
it'd be refreshing to read one of these stories and not have the "hero" be the world's biggest sissy - have any balls at all - for fuck sake
I usually don't like agreeing with all the overly negative comments but 18 chp and it feels like he is still the same guy in chp 1
Y'all, this is a hypnofetish story about a guy struggling with his darkest sexual impulses, if you want to see something else, go looking for it. You haven't exactly been mislead by the premise.
I’m seriously trying to give this a shot but goddamn your MC is a fucking pussy. And ffs I get there’s the whole “mind control” thing happening but dial it the fuck back.
I love this chapter so much because he finally sees Chelsea as sunbathing other than an opponent. That frustrated the hell out of me for so long. Just because her desires are different from his didn't make them any less valid. I'm liking the direction this is heading.
Btw it goes to show how well you write your characters if some of the horny losers on this site can get so salty over their choices lol
Seb is a complete and utter coward and immature moron... either make him grow up, or end the series... pick one.
Honestly this story had such an amazing start, but Seb is fucking exhausting. There's only so much wayward shy boy one can take before it's just irritating.
Chelsea Persued him, fought for him and went through extreme personal turmoil for him and he's like nahhh, hard pass Sophia just shows up and he's like omfg yes all day I'll do what I said I'd never do yesterday wooooo.
I get the whole "childhood friend" trope, but it felt really shoehorned in here.
Loved it, like that your going for a deeper story line with chelsea and her mom. Cant wait to see where it goes!
I regret not reading this sooner. You hit all of my buttons so hard and I cannot wait for more. I wish I could be Chelsea so badly
Given that he could have ended the conversation with a mere word it's more than a little bizarre.
On a personal note you don't negotiate with monsters, he should have just told her to go stick her head in the restaurant's fryer.