All Comments on 'Voyage of the Tunisian Rose'

Interesting concept, but you need help with English.

I enjoyed reading your story. A little long in the tooth and wordy at times perhaps, but very descriptive and inviting! Thanks for sharing your work.

A most excellent story. Among the best on this site for pure plot and compares favorably to published work. I did not notice any grammar errors, nor any typos that took me out of the story. The sex scenes made sense and flowed with the plot without seeming forced. The ship handling seemed correct to my storybook understanding of it, as did the dialog and character interaction.

I look forward to future stories and recommend that you ignore any who mark you down, you wrote an solid story.

Good story, even without H&N living together happily forever after ...