All Comments on 'Voyeuristic Hotel Maid'

Loved it. Well-written, great characters and story, and incredibly hot. I hope you continue the story.

This was AMAZING!! Can’t wait for more!

Great story. You described sex just the way I like it. I hope there are more chapters.

Brilliant story, well written, we need a part 2

That was very enjoyable, very well developed and written. I've had a hotel maid walk in on me twice but nothing came of it except a no touch cum in the shower after the first one

Good premise.

Nice buildup. Not just minutes. Not just hours. Days.

Would have liked it better if there'd been a bit more direct discription of exactly how he manipulated her body, and her reactions to each kind of manipulation.

It seems as if, after the fucking with the condom on, she took the lead to see if he could still get it up so they could do it again. And she could have tole him what she was doing, and why.

Maybe a bit of titty fucking would have fit well into the story.

And what about a bit of fingering her asshole, presumably a new experience for her.

Four stars.

The story was amazing in detail, but I kept hoping to read her response to getting cunnilingus for the first time. I myself would have licked every square inch of her pussy and bumhole before I ever even penetrated her.

very nice story!!

Great background & build up, very believable. She wrestled with her idea of being married, but gave in to her bodies needs & longings. You also worked a condom & “ safe sex” in for their first fuck. Not many other writers do. Enjoyed it very much. Looking forward for a return trip to Houston & further adventures. Slainte 👍

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 HOT story! Really, really great job!! A great slow burner...

Nice storey but sounds like an improved version of another story I have read here that is very similar in a lot of ways. General story line and a few of the sentences are almost identical. Probably a coincidence.

I would like to see that other story so please direct me to it since my story is an orginal written story.