by Greg15
I like sweet stories. I like stories about two people getting to know each other deeper and better and making love to each other, as well as hot and spicy fuck stories. This was a great read. So I rate 5.
And there are just 'what if's: Rob's trouble was not so apparent as Jen's crises. Crime event had some dragging effect on the story. I'm not sure some characters were necessary or not.
Overall, This is a remarkable story. Good job.
I do like your stories. Sure hope you’re still feeling creative and ready for the next one.