All Comments on 'Waif'

For some reason, my brain was telling me that when I read this before, Maia was pregnant at the end, but apparently not

Still love this story.

Thank you for sharing this beauty. I loved it. It made me feel good. That's amazing!

Well done!!!

Wow i just love a happy ending that moves me...

RANDI, I'VE LOVED YOU SINCE YOU POSTED YOUR FIRST STORY! I'VE ENJOYED EVERYTHING I HAVE EVER

READ OF YOURS' ON THIS AND ANOTHER SITE. I THINK IT MAY BE YOUR BEST YET! IT'S ALWAYS CINCO ESTRELLAS AMIGA.

What an absolutely lovely story. Again, i'm glad that the cheating was a framing mechanism for the story, and wasn't the whole story itself. The growth and love in the story is palpable and it left me with a warm smile on my face. 5*

definitely something different . really liked it . thanks .

Thanks Randi! So Tempe? Okay. Traffic is ridiculous which doesn’t reflect on ASU. Just adds another group to the congestion. Love is where you make it. Be those reasons you’re human and acting human. Cops in the valley seem to pick on those most vulnerable. They forget how to human when they put on the badge. Not all just enough to make it painful.

Oh yeah, five stars!

Very good Randi! Age is only an issue if you let it be, thank you. 5 stars

somewhere east of Omaha

Great fantasy ! Full of love. For everyone except the cheater. Anna looked for love elsewhere, and broke the trust, so now she's gotta find it elsewhere. Only criticism is Maia was too good with the technique on that first blowjob, if we are to believe she'd never done it before. She was obviously a virgin otherwise though, and that part was great. Overall, loved it ! ❤️

It reads like a Hallmark Movie, a nice Rom-com. It is easier to be unselfishly affluent, though

No painful obstacles to obstruct their attraction. Nice writing. Alls that ends well...

Great writing !!!!!

Love your rags to riches stories. Pays to have money?

Very well done. Chicken noodle soup-like story. The sweetness never crosses over into cloying.

Bravo!

i agree with another commenter ,this reads like a hallmark movie . i thought zendaya or someone like her would make a good maia ,then i looked her up and she's 27 so... still, very nice story .