All Comments on 'Waiting'

Nice, like it, although clearly there is more to come :)

omg this is a wonderful story. thank you for the time and effort you put into writing and editing this story. just wow. haven't had this good of an experience with a story in *almost* as long as since Seth got laid... :)

THANK YOU! I sure hope there will be a sequel, because I was very disappointed at the prospect, like they were, that this might only be a one-night stand. I sensed a real connection there and could easily see this blossoming/transitioning into a romance.

This was one of the hottest stories I have ever read. Your characters have depth. This seems more like some voyeuristic diary entry mixed with a “how to bag a cougar” lesson. I can’t wait for more.

Delicious, delectable start to this gastronomic feast. 5 & fave.

Great story. Five stars.

Surely there's git to be more as you write in such depth that you've created two beautiful characters that deserve love. 5⛤

Excellent, every little thing about the story was excellent

Amazing story can’t wait to read more of your work

🔥🔥

Excellent work on this story - it has plot, character development and it draws one into the story line instead of depending solely on the sex (which is smokin’ hot by the way!) to keep the reader interested. You very much have my appetite whetted for a sequel or series !

Wonderful start to what we hope is another great story from one of the top shelf writers. The story telling and character developments are what make the stories so real life like. Like watching your favorite sexual tv drama. Such erotic entertainment. Thanks for your time to write these great tales. Cheers

amazing story. what a fantasy it is for anyone in the service industry

I don't care that much about the typos and grammatical errors, but this is just boring. The dialogue is so basic and dull that it's hard to pay attention, despite this only being a couple of Lit pages. It's a real slog to finish this.

"Oh God!" she cried out and shuddered for a moment. After she caught her breath, she moaned, "Christ, one lick of my clit and one finger inside me and I cum. I'm so fucking easy."

"You're all fucking hot." "Oh God, just fuck me already." "Oh Fuck!" she cried out.

Not everybody has talent, but you could at least make an effort. 1 star is generous.

Nice dialog. Hot sex. No lengthy monologues. No lengthy descriptions of the scenery. Just enough to create the scene and leave the rest to the imagination. Good job. I got hard. Job done.

Fun, sexy, smart, romantic. Loved it. Thanks!

Haven’t read this.

I am not going to read it until you’ve finished it.

I can’t tell you how much I enjoyed Little Packages. Quite frankly, I didn’t know DD/LG was even a thing until that story. After reading it, I searched for other stories in that category. I was immensely disappointed in all of them. Not a one had, the character depth, humor, and genuine loving relationship that you developed in that story. Every other story with that tag I’ve read is trash. Little Packages is perhaps one of my all-time favorite series I’ve read here in the past nine years.

But, I do recall having to go back and reread the chapters of Little Packages when you had longer spaces between postings. I understand. I’m sure you have a life outside of this. But that was quite frustrating. I also just read your Black Box series, assuming it was complete, only to be placed in a waiting line once again.

So please, when you finish this series (and eventually Black Box) please put a comment like FINAL INSTALLMENT in the description of the finishing chapter. I will happily wait until you have finished these. It beats the hell out of the frustration of waiting.

The leaver of the anonymous comment below is an idiot and completely wrong.

It had to be said.

Awesome story and now I’m going to read the next part. Great story, believable characters, good dialog, and good sex.

Nice characters and a good story.

Great story. thanks

Just wonderful and delightfully funny in spots. Bravo!

You know you are pretty good at this! I thought maybe the award winning (First Place Award Winning) Valentines day story might be a fluke! But no, this one is right there in the same class. Glad I found your work but now I have your whole library to consume! Oh whoa is me!

On to chapter 2!

Cheers

SAGE

Easily a five. Great "Story Telling"! Having been there a couple, or more, of times with similar situations with women in similar situations it had the ring of truth, not just fantasy. Good "Story Tellers" are damned hard to find. Good editors are not. So get a better Editor, and keep doing the telling.... :-)

Seth may have hit the 'mother lode,' so to speak--as long as he keeps the tiramisu coming. Worthy of five stars.