All Comments on 'Waiting for the 20:29'

Thank you.

a well written story.

What a well written intriguing sensual story...great stuff!!

Sequel, please! ::grin:: I loved this one.

Imaginative AND erotic! What a brilliant story!

ah, to find a place like that! wonderfully written!

indeed a cut above the ordinary!

Far better than most stories I have read, wonderfully crafted and entirely credible.

They type of story that just makes you wonder.....

Well done and congrats

This was indeed quality work.

An outstanding story with an interesting plot twist. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

What. more can one say? Wow!

YOMEYO

What a fantastic little story, Thank you

I always love a good story with a spooky twist at the end.

Please please please write chapter 2. This is truly an amazing story. I love your work. Love 4nk8

Please please please write chapter 2. You have teasingly left it wide open for a 2nd between Jennie and josiah. I love this story, as like your other work is well written and really got me going.

Christina ❤️

I loved this Max, spooky, yes but in the best traditions of the genre it has everything including a surprising twist at the end and written in your own inimitable style. I suppose you know that most of your stories end up in me favourites list. Thanks Max.

Recently come across your work. You have some great stories, are you going to publish a 2nd chapter to this story?