Waiting, Just Waiting

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Also, I do not read emails. The few that I have read were so hateful, some even threatening that I now simply delete the emails without even opening them. Really? You hate me and hate my stories that much? Then don't read them. There's several other fine authors on this site.

Have a sunshiny day; just use plenty of sunblock.

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SmugglerjimSmugglerjim4 days ago

No hate mail frim me Jim .

I enjoyed the read..

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Sad story but looking like a happy future. Drug addiction can be a killer for sure, Well written, I actually feel bad for the poor wife.

brn2vdobrn2vdo7 months ago

Pretty darn good 👍

rbloch66rbloch668 months ago

Well written, but a little too raw for my taste.

jmmj5jmmj5about 1 year ago

Man, I enjoyed that.

Parts of it were depressing, but life is like that at times. I'm a sucker for a happy ending, though...or in this case, a hopeful one. Keep on writing 'em, JimBob.

OilcanjonOilcanjonabout 1 year ago

I Iike your stories. They are well crafted and give a perspective into another culture. And chubby girls need love, too.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very sad. Two different paths for those fighting addiction. Hope Morgan and Bronson make it together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it, 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Anon wrote: 'One star because burning coal is disgusting'

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What an amazingly dumb, stupid and ignorant reason to down-vote a story. The writer was not CONDONING it, fool, if anything just the oppo. Chucklefu*ks like you give the good named of Anonymous a bad rap!

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraover 2 years ago

Dialogue worthy of James Lee Burke or Elmore Leonard, both masters of the written/spoken word! 5/5!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lot of people think that stories in the LW category have to be either BTB or cuckold. Stories like this one don't actually fir into either category so I tend to think of them as "Escape" stories where one spouse ends up escaping from a bad relationship through no fault of their own.

This is another 5-star tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wonderful writing, but such a sad story. I feel bad for Becky, not strong enough to fight her demons and she paid the price.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Thank you!

Two souls starting fresh. Not a writer, but ending says "All is well."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

LoL

He deserved everything she did to him .

That's what happens when you knowingly hook up with a mudshark .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

One star because burning coal is disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Thank you for leaving the ending up to us.

I would like to think he found his one true love and they lived happily ever after having a dozen kids.

I guess I am a romantic at heart. The evil drug addicted whore and her pimp ended life the way they should. Riddled with bullets and dead. Hope her death was slower than Demarcus's, so she can contemplate on where she went wrong.

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