All Comments on 'Waiting to Happen'

I really love this story! Wasn't too long, wasn't too short. Didn't have a really deep plot, but it didn't need a deep plot.

Lovely...

There were times when I had been tempted to dig deeper into the plot, but I didn't want to stray from or unnecessarily drag out the story that I wanted to tell. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks!

You have a really good mix here of drama and romance that meant I had to read the story in one go even if I *really* didn't have the time. Great work! And I'm already looking forward to reading your other contributions later.

I can't be too sorry for taking up your time cos that's one of the best compliments I've ever gotten. :) Thank you for reading!

Fan'fucking'tastic

I want to express my gratitude for a story that quenched my thirst for a satisfying climax. All of your stories get me hotter than this July heat wave. Thanks for sharing your talents!

That was a brilliant story, full of true emotion and beautifully written, not to mention totally hot!! Thank you

Grinning and happy after reading this..soo luv it.. ❤️

Love both the characters hailey and especially claire who's one of our own, 😉

Definitely a loving granddaughter who loves taking care of her lola..

Hope to read more of someone like claire.. More power.. Ang galing mo ba!

-ur island ph girl 🏝️

Im a filipino so I'm really happy and very interested on the story. I like it sooo much. I didn't expect the problem will be about the girls, so its another plus for the author. Please keep writing more!!!

I quite enjoyed reading this story. I liked the plot, and the buildup of chemistry between Claire and Hailey was well executed. I have insomnia and am constantly looking for stuff to keep my mind occupied in the quiet recesses of the night. Your story provided the perfect distraction and I happily got lost in it. Thank you and well done!

Thank you so much for all your comments! I have enjoyed writing Hailey and Claire a lot, and it makes me glad to know you guys liked the story:) I can't stress enough how much I appreciate it.

Nice to see fellow Filipinos on here, too.:)

This was a truly amazing story and such a pleasure to read. Please write a part 2!!

This is amazing. Thank you for creating this wonderful story!

Absolutely loved how your writing took me on a whirlwind of a ride in just 6 pages. Loved your narrator and the great conflict. Hope to see more from you. Thank you for sharing.

Tense, erotic, poignant story - you write well. Whether we hear more about Claire and Hailey or not is fine (though would be interesting), because you surely have so many more takes to tell. Thanks

Jamie, nicely written. I couldn't help but love Claire and Hailey. So glad that Claire's conscience prevailed and Hailey let love overcome the hurt. Thanks

More than the fantastic stories you've weaved, my heart swells with Pinoy pride 👍♥️ may your passion for writing never wane

Thank you so much for writing this! It was a great love story. I know you said you didn’t want to drag out this story but I wish the angst was resolved with a little more depth than them not being able to pull away from each other. Is there going to be a part 2 where they are sweet and cute? Fell in love with both these character and hope you find the idea of exploring their lives more fulfilling and fun and we all get a part two!

Thank you so much for writing this! It was a great love story. I know you said you didn’t want to drag out this story but I wish the angst was resolved with a little more depth than them not being able to pull away from each other. Is there going to be a part 2 where they are sweet and cute? Fell in love with both these character and hope you find the idea of exploring their lives more fulfilling and fun and we all get a part two!

This was a very well written story. Loved the time you took to develop the characters, each with own set of issues. You made them believable and real. I second a lot of the previous commenters. A part two would be a wonderful read. You could take us deeper into their relationship, picture Claire finding her way to get her law degree, her and Hailey continue supporting Open Doors. Maybe having Hailey run for office based the way she cares for her community. Either way, you delivered a wonderful story. Thx!

Very well written, well paced and interesting story. Nicely detailed and sensitive sex scenes. Superb!

Really enjoyed this story from one of my favorite authors.

You want feedback? You want feedback? Well here ya go. Nice job. I enjoy your writing. Thank you.

Enjoyed it hope you write more

I love it when I stumble across an older story on here (and always find myself wondering how I've never found the story/or the author sooner). This was such an incredible read and I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to finish, the characters were amazing and perfect for each other. You had me nervous and worried at points, thinking that the outcome was going to be a different one; I'm soo pleased that things worked out. It wasn't perfect... But they were perfect 🙂.

I know it's been a while now, but I really hope you write more incredible stories for us fans

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