All Comments on 'Waiting to Pay a Debt'

Could be a really great story if you would actually tell the story...

There are alot of chunks of detail missing. Why was he given hormones, without telling him and how could be not notice? How in the world can you not be pissed when you find out? Also, did Gerry know he was trans and how did he find out? I don't know, he just comes off as this dummy with no future, no energy and just accepts everything done to him.

Good build up but no real meat to the story. It felt like the author had been writing the start to this story for a while, but once the story reached a certain point it was like "ok, lets just finish this now." there are so many questions that should be answered: Did this happen to anyone else? is this all done with just hormones? hypnotics? hypnotism? psychoreactive drugs and persuasion? Are Terry and Penny plants form the casino to progress the protagonists story? How is Gerry involved in their development? does this casino do this as a side hustle, people of a certain persuasion pay the casino to trap and turn the unwitting into supplicant sex toys and potential partners?