by Rob_mDear
you get coal all right... but only because your ending left a huge gaping PART TWO void...
you could fit a whole series in the gaping void you left at the end..
I liked this a lot. You read and see a lot of stories about lost elves and citizens of the North Pole in traditional xmas stories, but never anything with children the Clauses might have had. The imagination here was not just plausible, but very believable. Very well written, great plot and story, and very sexy. Definitely going on my favorite list
Absolutely great writing with awesome narrative, fascinating character development and hot sex scenes. Thanks and this has potential of a promising series. Merry Christmas
Your next story should be about what happens next. More sex, more sex, and more sex. This was a rather interesting story. Yeah, you'll get coal probably for all eternity now, but it's worth it! Great story
That's pretty much all there is to say on the matter. With the exception of a FEW typos, this was truly exciting to read and enjoy!
(said in a voice mimicking Mr. Magoo)
I think Santa will be very pleased with that story. I know I enjoyed it. My guess is that you'll have a stocking filled with ... erotic toys, perhaps?
Jiminy Christmas!
It's amazing, I was in mood for a really good father-daughter holiday story and *poof* here it is. Thank you, it was wonderful. I personally like the image of Santa and his daughter going at it like this. I also really liked the humor, the bit with Santa playing video games was particularly humorous and fun to read.
I too think a second part would be interesting but then again, in my mind, I think it is just fine as it is because from here, I can imagine Kristen kicking that bitch, Mrs. Claus, out of the North Pole and becoming the new Mrs. Claus. The wifey Santa deserves.
Wow! What a great Christmas gift! I wasn't sure if I wanted to end my evening with a santa fetish story or a daddy fetish story and here you have given me both...and I share a name with the main character to boot! Thank you for an awesome story!
Who cares if anyone has a twisted Santa image now. I NEED a Santa like that in my life like NOW.
Excellent story and a good way to trash an ol' myth!
WOW!! This was delightfully enchanting and wickedly satirical. Just perfect.
It's so nice to see santa getting something back! I liked the two concepts of santa time to explain how he gets round the world so quickly and chimney magic to gain entry and it's other sexual use was brilliant. I dont know if we need a part 2 or not but if you can come up with other equally as interesting concepts then I'm sure it would be a great read also. The only gripe I have is that I would have loved to see a bit more tenderness in the loving sometimes to go with all rampant rutting but that's my personal thing and it did not detract from the story one little bit. Great work and well written!
Holy shit! This is by far the hottest story I have ever read on here! Amazing!
Please, please give us all the gift of updating this story! One of the best I've read!
I want this to be a hallmark Christmas movie!
I love this and want to meet their baby - does he or she have Daddy's magic, and to know what Mrs Klaus says!
Favorited, ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ and in my top Daddy daughter story list