All Comments on 'Waking Up'

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what a hot story and so explicit and true good job

REALLY HOT

Love your first story...such passion and desire...an early morning as they should all be...please continue to share your works...you have a romantic and sensual way with words...I look forward to more...

Great job BG2! This story is so sweet and intimate, yet passionately hot. The words flow along like a rolling wave, building, cresting... then crashing in erotic bliss.

You captured early morning love splendidly!

HUGS!

~Ash

This story is one of my favorite fantasies I have for when I have my Love in bed with me. You put into words just what I hope to do someday very soon. Great job!

I think it's a wonderful story..Such detail down too the softness of your skin and the feelings you felt. Feels like you are there as you read it..Good work I am sure there will be lots more to come.

So incredibly hot n sexy. Although it sounds so familiar...

Great story! More, more ...

This was a very sexy first story, BG - it was very easy to read, visualize and to feel.

Your story made me want to get in bed and snuggle. (Ok, maybe more than snuggle.. ;) )

~Honey

Great story, darlin'.

Great job, BG! Very tender and erotic. What a wonderful way to start the day! More, more, give us more! ;O)

Hot, hot, hot.

It could have used more detail, a little less repetition of action, and a slightly larger thesaurus for vocabulary. As a first try, it's very good, flowing smoothly from one phase to another (although I'm still confused as to what position that was; it seemed like it started out as spoon sex and ended missionary?)with a very rich, sleepy feel that matches the setting of the piece. All in all... a C+. Which, considering that I've only given one A in all the time I've been reading Literotica stories (including my own), is high praise. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Could just visualise playing the part, enjoyed your first story sexy lady

mmmmmm... I could totally feel the experience you were writing about! Left me very turned on!!

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What a wonderful Sunday morning dream. You covered all the bases including the gentle driffing off to sleep. This was a tender HOT one

Thanks

Just found this. Wonderful