All Comments on 'Waking Up to Ellen Ch. 02'

Wonderfully crafted. Loved the emotional turmoil Michael is going through and its manifestations. Ellen's portrayal is very very complementary. Please continue. Eagerly waiting for the next episode

Keep on keeping it (Phantastically) real! As utterly impossible this entire story arc would have been in my life, your craftsmanship makes it easy to imagine the maelstrom Michael & Ellen have found themselves in. 5 + fave.

OK. Now I'm sad

Is that the end? 😭

Smutty and equally realistic and romantic

Far more reality based than most all other Mother/son stories. The happily ever after might come in Chapter 3, but for now there's no way forward for the two of them other than to live separate lives- both of them hurting inside and out. Like i say- a big big dose of the reals!

This one is not just about sex and conquer, it's about love. And 'love hurts. ooh ooh love hurts'- Nazareth. They certainly have tried 'a little tenderness'. Michael, not Mike, became too attached- he was always wanting to be with her, agonizing when they're apart. And now the usurper has the tables turned on him and he is now, in turn, the usurped. Play with fire and you gonna get burned!

your story is so very well-told; lots of nuance, lots of heartfelt sentiment. Your story is a shining beacon for all us erstwhile writers hoping to be half as good! Thanks ever so much for writing! I'm sure the final Chapter will not disappoint whichever way it turns out

Ok, we need the next part ASAP!!!!!!!

Really really looking forward to the next one

I am at a loss for words. My heart aches all the way down to my balls for Michael and his Mom Ellen. There has to be another chapter or two. Hopefully sooner than later.

well written.. exactly as i thought.. his mother is a cheating whore.. not only destroying her marriage, cuckolding her husband, but now ruined her son and cuckolding him too..

I mean being a simp, the son def. deserves this mess.. 3/5..

I really wish we wont see a good ending.. Let the son move on, stand his ground and the wife can suffer again with her husband..

So you went and tossed in real life with this story . Mom says that he was the only one for her, then she goes and screws the husband. An confessions to it. This in my opinion either needs to end here or mike needs to find someone else and move on, mom knew what she was doing

3/5

it's a rarity to see good stories on this site nowadays. Great job 5/5

Not much to this chapter a, and what happens next? 3 stars

Excellent. Well written, realistic, great fucking, and oral. Sad at the end. Plenty of room for Ellen to make visits to Michael's apartment, it actually makes things easier. But will he ever forgive, and trust his mom again, since she threw him to the curb for his dad????????????? 5 Stars!

How sad for everyone except the useless husband who didn't give crap about his wife to begin with. If she had any guts she would have booted his ass and stuck with the one who was there for her and made her feel alive and beautiful. Michael would have and did do everything for her and loved her with everything in him. He was good enough for her when she needed someone and then she goes crawling back to her useless husband and rips Michael's heart out and stomps all over it. She should have decided who she would choose before she started it. It just makes me sad.

Triste no final, ainda vai te continuação...

Continua....

Eagerly waiting for the next part....

Nice can not wait to see where you take this,

esperar para ver onde você levará isso,

Wow. Looking forward to the next chapter.

There should be some suffering for the mother as she played with both the father and the son, especially the son

The next chapter should be the son getting a good girlfriend and father ignoring the mother or something like that. Make the mother miserable

I would Love read more about mother and son . Will the father find the true ?

Great start. Love the realism. Hoping to see a new chapter.

What made the dad all of a sudden start back paying attention to her?Maybe he heard her moans and screams and thought they sounded familiar?Maybe he saw her either coming or going?Did a neighbor see her park and walk back? Something obviously did as he did an immediate 180 in just a day or so.

I'm on the edge of my seat with this gripping tale. You write so vividly. You've captured these characters and their emotions so perfectly. I truly hope we won't have to wait too much longer for the next chapter. Bravo to you!

Thinking author must be in a mental block considering the 6-month gap. Sigh.

Was enjoying the story too, with just the right amount of sexual activities, sensualism and banter.

When will be the next episode

When would be the next part Hey I love triangle in under the same roof

Will there be a paet 3?

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