All Comments on 'Waking Up to Ellen'

OMG, I've got to have more chapters! Loved the long build up to the main event. 5 stars. Extremely well written, brings out the inner conflict between what the characters want to want (doing what they've been taught is right) versus what they actually want (living out their sexual chemistry). Several directions this could go in future chapters, I'm eager to see which one you choose.

Very well written. Thank you.

This was simply amazing

Wow, amazing! More please.

Loved it! Hoping that you'll continue it with more chapters. Five stars and a favorite point!

LOVE the build up....love trying to sneak peaks....looking forward to more stories from you!

WAKING UP TO ELLEN

An excellent exploration between mother and son, with a touch of cheating iof keeping it in the family.

Continue on

Cheers '

P.S. Can't wait for Waking up to Ellen's part 2

OMG I can't believe that was your first story. That was better than almost everything here on lit. You must be an accomplished author in some other genres. Nobody pops out of nowhere and delivers a masterpiece like this on their first try. I'm begging you continue this story. It was beautiful, loving, sexy, captivating. Never have I reread a story here at lit, I will read this story multiple times. I want to burn your words into my brain and heart. Five stars aren't nearly enough to show how awesome this story is. So glad my comments are first up.

First sentence makes it clear it's about a skank and some asshole son, both willing to cuck the husband/father. Not even tagged properly. Hell no.

As I read this, the whole time I was gripped by thoughts of “when are they gonna get caught?” What

would happen when they get caught? Dad may be getting boring and the marriage is getting stale,

but he’s not dumb-am certain he suspects something amiss. Also, wasn’t a sister mentioned…where

did she go?

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Looking forward to more, 5 ⭐️, dance on, and a hearty HELL YES!!

Very well done.

Excellent story per se, considering it your first piece makes it a gem.

Can't wait to read more!

Great story.i was hard by the 3rd page. He needs to accidentally get her pregnant. TY

A+++++

Waking Up To Ellen is an Excellent story! I loved every minute of it. It was passionate, naughty, and built to an amazing and beautiful ending that did not disappoint. Can't wait to read more!

Great job. Can't wait for more! Pour it on!

The cuckoldry ruined the story for me. I end up not liking it.

Can you write stories every day? Almost all the authors here suck except you!

Very well done. You laid a great, realistic, gradual build up! Much more enjoyable than a wham, bam, thank you ma’am story.

Very enjoyable reading. It's funny that some people (who will remain anonymous:), only want to complain. If it offends you, why are you reading on? It was very well-written and tantilizing. Write on please!

Mutual seduction, the best kind of romance. Excellent story, thank you.

Great story! I loved it! Michael's dad needs to go to weeklong convention for work. 5 Stars!

I expected a bit more hesitancy from Ellen, but her knowingly teasing him earlier helped alleviate that somewhat.

Otherwise, absolutely fantastic. Easy top 10, maybe top 5 for me.

Great story!

Please continue with these characters. There are so many ways you can continue! Looking forward to more of this story!

这是个很好的故事，希望可以长一些，母子能怀孕作为结局就更好了

very well written. hope to see part 2 soon

Excellent story. I found mom was fairly easy because hubby ignored her needs. Mom and son need a vacation together since dad is too busy. Five stars, can't wait for more.

This is beautifully written, and a perfect slow-burn pace. I really hope you continue with these two. I suspect there's a lot more story to tell, especially now that they've realized how pleasure-filled their coupling can be. Wonderful job!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ കൊള്ളാം, സൂപ്പർ ബ്രോ... അമ്മയും മകനും മൂത്രംം ഒഴിച്ച് കളിക്കുന്ന ഒരു കഥ എഴുതാമോ..? അമ്മയും മകനും പരസ്പരം വായിൽ മൂത്രം ഒഴിച്ച് കുടിക്കുന്നതും, അമ്മ മകന് ഗ്ളാസ്സിൽ മൂത്രം ഒഴിച്ച് കൊടുക്കുന്നതും എല്ലാം ഉൾപ്പെടുത്തി...

Someone else's story?

Awesome the build up to their incest was very well written, but you need to carry on with this story to see how they continue to explore their love for each other!!!!!!!!!!!! 5 STARS

Best story

Loved it you could feel his love for his mother in your words you should continue and see how this unfolds 5 stars

Waiting for the continuation of this

Why great writer like tryalittletenderness write less stories compared to the rest of the authors here who produce nothing but trash stories

Continua

Aguardando a continuação

Wow.

So powerful and erotic.

Going to the next chapter.

I'm just hoping it doesn't make me sad.

Wonderful, just wonderful. It's an absolute treat to read your creations. Where have you been all these days? Please continue. Eagerly waiting for your episode number 3

Very well written…eager to read the next parts….

Just read the first one and for the first time after reading so many delusional stories this one has a believe and enjoyable energy. No heroics from anyone, no power tripping. Believable characters with normal believable fears, believable urges challenging the wrongs and the rights of society.

Loved this part of the story ready for next part 5 stars

Nice!

Great story! Well written! Wonderfully erotic!