All Comments on 'Waking Up With a Monster'

Thank you for an enticing and entertaining read. You are a true WordSmith Master.

Mustang, Apple products, running, IHOP. Stephen King does it, but uses subtlety. I've Got The Supercharged penis with the aftermarket testicular exhaust, rounded off with the butthole wing.

Everything in her actions before/at the hospital exactly illustrated her character.

That guy figure out a way a to kept of his crazy ex. After he life sucks long she will climb back on the potty pot blame her ex-best friend got takeing her husband try to kill her again . She just might try to do the whole family

I have read a lot of your stories. Some I loved and others not so much, but I never really had much of a comment to make, but I couldn't let one thing go by in this one.

You say in this one that Rachel gave him "some of the worst blow jobs" he ever had.

Now I think this is just not looking out for other guys here. I realize you were being comparative, but there is no such thing as a bad blow job and we cant have women reading this and getting the wrong idea. This is one area where guys need to stick together.

Thank you for your attention to this serious matter.

A great story. Probably four pages too long, but still a great story. I say it’s too long because we had to wade through three or four steamer trunks full of baggage to get the meat of the story. Kathy’s baggage, Dean’s baggage, etc. etc. Too much. But there were some funny lines. One of the best was something like, ‘enraptured by the brilliant acting and the script’. And he was talking about “Galactica”! I almost fell off my chair laughing. What’s that the kids used to say in their texts, ROFLMAO? Yeah, that was me, almost. Still, all in all, a great story.

she would later admit to watching me sleep for literal hours.

some neighbors pissed her off, so one day she killed their cat and stuffed it in their mail-box. it got worse the more i discovered at the end.

and i thought she was pretty sane. the thing with a 'smart' sociopath is they are extremely dumb....when you stop trusting people. they prey on mostly emotional manipulation. once you stop to ask the simple question: "is this person being honest?" they become very easy to spot. i think the scary thing is despite how easy it is to spot, 98% of people wont. we are hardwired to take people at face value. a sociopath will almost never act suspicious, in fact that's a red flag. normal people fuck up more easily and show that in their facial expressions and mannerisms.

Great story. I enjoyed it very much.

You have to wonder about Marriage Vows when you think of a situation like this. I mean there has to be a line where the worse part over rules the better part right?

For 18 years of there 20 year relationship she was fucking other men like they where just another peice of candy at the candy store. It has always made me wonder how some people can take sex as just an act of exercise when they have made a life long vow to another. Then they go home to the partner and have sex or make love to them as if nothing ever happened. With people who have that capacity I have to wonder if something didn't make there mind a bit wacky from something that traumatized them and broke there normal way of thinking. I mean it's almost as simple as turning a switch off and on.

The drive to the hospital was hilarious. And the cop saying, “You have the right to remain silent so please fucking use it.” had me on the floor.

Good, fun story and much needed after reading a couple of other very good, but serious stories that really saddened me.

I would love to meet a Rachel, she sounds awesome, and hot.

Actually feel sorry for Katherine. Husband was / is an idiot. K TOLD HIM ABOUT PROBLEMS WITH DAUGHTER. He poo poos, and pushes her aside in favor of daughter.

Katherine was a psychotically deranged super-slut... how can you feel sorry for her? She left a trail of misery in her wake and didn't feel one iota of remorse.

Lila latched onto her dad because Katherine abandoned her! For the first few years, Katherine wanted nothing to do with her daughter. She was running away for weeks at a time to fuck Dean, not giving two shits about the family she deserted. What kind of vile subhuman bitterly resents her own daughter? Katherine was simply an incredibly self-centred attention whore... she ruined her own life and deserved to end up in the nuthouse.

Of finding bugnuts wives, slow but not stupid husbands, smart daughters and stunning soon to be great new, faithful wives. While I agree with Katherine's comments about Michigan drivers, you should come to Texas around the time three snowflakes are falling from the sky and don't even drive in parking lots. The Cylons in the newer Battlestar were good, but I prefer Stargate, especially with RDA, the Wraith in Atlantis were chilling. Good job, good story. Signed: BTW

Never heard of such a thing. A good trade up for the husband. Great story.5

Loved this Story a lot ...

10 pages of the same garbage repeated over and over and over. It should have been 5 pages max. Sorry Stang, only 2 Stars for this one.

I really do like your work, but something about the build-up in this story is off - flight attendants don't (to the best of my knowledge) travel drop off samples for their bosses, who can't make the trip for whatever reason. - AOA

She wasn't a flight attendant. She only told Dean that to cover for the fact that she would be out of town for extended times while she was back with her family.

She gives the term 'Bat Shit Crazy' real substance.

"You have the right to remain silent, so please fucking use it," said the detective.........................Best line.

That woman is a sick bitch. She is nucking futs.

..... she was BUG NUTS and that putting it mildly!!!!!

Excellent story....but the lady was crazier than a gigantic bag of Christmas nuts! 5*

Dayyyaammm. Helluvah good story. And I thought my ex was a little 'eccentric', now I know she was nearly normal. LOL.

Fantastic job! 5 stars!

Loved how you created a couple of those names!!

Great job of writing woman as we watch her slowly making that ride to crazy town.

Well done!

Please sell this story to Hollywood. Maybe it can be a good psycho-thriller. But reading this 10 pages is a waste of time (last pages only scanned). A dumb husband and an insane wife. Mark has no clue about her mental illness, never ask why she not came along with her daughter. Katherine is developing from an ill person to an regular cheater and liar. And at the end (of five long pages) a person who is out of reality and dangerous for others.

Why she didn´t kill all involved person. Would be a better end than only Rachel, Lina and Mark are happy. All bad persons Katherine and Brina and even poor Dean get the shit. This happy end sounds lame for this long run for solution.

What a crappy story from a usually good author. Far too long and just uninteresting. 1*

One of the better Stang stories for me. Although find it hard to believe that Kat was able to keep a lid on her insanity for so long. Granted, the Stang MCs generally are required to be a bit thick, but even so ...

Kath sure was good at hiding her crazy.

Could not stand the Rachel character. Finely stopped reading as she worked at turning Mark into a henpecked wimp. No time for him to go through the grieving process with her in his face all the time. Highly inappropriate, dicey move for Mark to move right in with her. I had hoped he would find someone else. I did read the last paragraph but nothing after he went back to Rachel's apartment after being served.

5 Stars on a Great Story . His ex wife is Bat Shit Crazy for sure . He sure as Heck traded up in My Humble Opinion .

This is some Amber Heard on mushroom level shit.

Good story, and I found the Katherine antics very funny.

5 stars.

Crazy funny. Good read 5

Many Lit stories try to portray a mentally disturbed cheater. You have topped them all. Funny, sad and believable.

Excellent start. Believable reasoning for the cheater. Smart and strong characters.

Then it turned into an old sappy guy being "hit on" and "controlled by" young women.

Still a nice story overall.

Katherine was a narcissistic sociopath through and through. Narcissistic sociopaths don’t see the world in the same way other people do. In their distorted version of reality, they are entitled to whatever they want, regardless of what it takes to get it or who is hurt in the process. They will justify their actions, even ones that are inexcusable, and show no remorse. They Live In a Deluded Reality

Narcissistic sociopaths have a habit of using, exploiting, and taking advantage of others. This tendency shows up in all of their relationships, including romantic relationships and any friendships or family relationships they’ve been able to maintain. They seek out codependent, nurturing types who are more easily manipulated and controlled through guilt, shame, or fear, and will hold onto these relationships only as long as the person is “useful.

They Have No Moral Boundaries. There are no lines a narcissistic sociopath won’t cross to get what they want. Their moral compass is non-existent, leaving them without the sense of “right and wrong” that most people have. After doing something harmful, illegal, or sadistic, they won’t feel remorse, regret, or guilt. In fact, they may even feel a sense of satisfaction knowing they were able to deceive, emotionally manipulate, or hurt someone. They Get Bored Easily. A narcissistic sociopath is constantly seeking sensations and cheap thrills because nothing can hold their interest and attention for long. They become easily bored with people, things, and activities, and will abandon them once they are no longer entertained.

I didn't go for the story THAT much, but there is one superb line in it:

"You have the right to remain silent, so please fucking use it."

The names in this story cracked me up. Go Merpyle and Hot Lips Houlihan. Love the nods to classic TV shows.

So much of the Katherine character is like my sociopathic mother that it’s scary. Author could have used her for a role model. She even tried to stab my dad with a steak knife when I was about 10 years old. My dad tried to get her help once and she tried to grab the steering wheel and wreck the car once she realized where he was taking her. Dad passed away some years ago and she really came unhinged after that, chasing everyone away with her constant name calling and screaming at people. I have not talked to her in at least 5 years, last time I phoned her she screamed at me for getting married 30 years ago without her permission. She has great grandkids she will never see because she refuses to acknowledge they exist. 80 years old now and she will die a lonely old hag out on the old family farm and it will likely take a month or more for anyone to find the body, and no one will care.

Now this was 1 of ur best stories drama,action,n some nice smut thrown in very very good. Thank u for ur hard work it was definatly enjoyed n appreciated.

Theres all kind of spousal abuse, working too many hours, spending too long in a bar or on the golf course and then there is taking your love and giving it to someone else and that includes a child of which there are many examples including the one in this story. I gave up when i realised that you werent going to make the mc see what he had done, at least there was none at the end. Of course the wife should have said something but i feel you missed a chance of a good ending rather than pander to the women haters.

How in the world did Mark pass Xray school? He's dumber than box of rocks. Hard to see anything around you when your head is 2 foot up your ass.

Five and a Fave from me, AGAIN. This mad woman I understood. Very well described.

1 star - you have to get some serious, long-term, therapy for your mustang addiction, because it is interfering with most of your stories by dropping your ratings by at least 4 points - every time someone sees the word mustang.

The guy with the Mustang problem is taking things a bit far, although I often wonder about the addiction US storytellers have with them - compared to international offers, Porsche, Lotus, Aston Martin, BMW, Mercedes etc. they are very much under "also ran", even leaving out the apparently somewhat unreliable Italians.

I liked the story, but it seems a little "padded out" and the MC is gloriously ignorant of the world he lives in.

A great story. Katherine was a real bitch and deserved what she got. I don’t award five stars very often but this tale deserves it.

Another masterpiece

>Several people almost hit me as I drove to the hospital. And a couple of them were parked cars. They must've been those self driving cars.

Many tears were shed, her trip to the hospital was fucking hilarious.

Another masterpiece by the Stangster! Formulaic? Perhaps, but the formula works for me. Louis L' Amour's Westerns were formulaic but very successful so Stangstar06 is in good company. I'll be honest, I skip over most the sex scenes because the meat is in dialogue and seeing what new human machinations and one liners Stang can come up with. 5 stars as usual