by MicheleNylons
Really enjoyed his/her touch of attitude at the end - fun watching her bring Wendy around and can almost see this as being Allen/Ellen - once upon a time. Looking forward to more as the two of them contend with each other and Wendy's new life!
I love the way you have written this entire story so far. Going from one extreme to the other was fascinating to read. I especially enjoyed how you would say what Wendy was thinking but then do what she was told just like most people in life but best of all was how she acted at the end of the chapter. I found it fulfilling the way you had her tell off both her mistress and her thoughts toward her mother.
Best chapter yet and can’t wait for the next one!